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It is always said that a person living in his past is never happy with his present life.

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It is always said that a person living in his past is never happy with his present life. The prompt states that learning about the past has no significance for those people who are living in the present. While it is important in one's life to always live in the present and not to be daunted by the past, in my opinion, I agree to the prompt, but only to a certain extent. Completely ignoring or discarding the past is not healthy. It is true that we should always be looking forward in our life and be making decisions in the present that shapes our future, but it is equally important to learn from what the past has taught us. For example, the human civilization has witnessed two ugly world wars, which has caused havoc to millions of human lives all across the globe. It resulted in death and suffering, and forrced our society to rebuilt itself from the very foundation. Today, the current generation has taken a lesson from our past, and has taken measures to avoid such conflicts that causes destruction in a large scale. The United Nations is one such prime example. This organisation, along with many others are striving for global peace. However, sometimes it is important for us to not look back and learn about things from our past. Our society is heavily centred around the concept of faith and religion. And it is a fact that a lot of these religious values are orthodox and regressive. However, positive changes are being made, where we are continously being more open to different human perspectives and discarding these archaic and orthodox norms. Therefore, one must try not to re-learn or even explore these values ever again. Acceptance of LGBTQ community in our world and their liberation movement is one such example. We have to be more accepting and move forward with our lives, without ever going back to the haunting past. Hence, I believe that in some cases, it is crucial for us to learn from the past. But in other cases, we have to ignore the past and be mindfully living in the present. Like a majority of the questions that humans have posed, there is no one right or wrong answer to this either.
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is never happy with his
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life. The prompt states that learning about the
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has no significance for those
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people
who are living in the
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present
. While it is
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important
in one's life to always
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live
in the
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present
and not to
be daunted
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, in my opinion, I
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agree
to the prompt,
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but
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only
to a certain extent.

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is not healthy. It is true that we should always be looking forward in our life and be making decisions in the
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present
that shapes our future,
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but
it is
equally
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important
to learn from what the
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has taught us.
For example
, the
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human
civilization has witnessed two ugly world wars, which has caused havoc to millions of
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human
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lives
all across the globe. It resulted in death and suffering, and
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forrced
our society to rebuilt itself from the
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very
foundation.
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Today
, the
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current
generation has taken a lesson from our
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past
, and has taken measures to avoid such conflicts that causes destruction in a large scale. The United Nations is one such prime example. This
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organisation
, along with
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many
others are striving for global peace.

However
,
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sometimes
it is
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important
for us to not look back and learn about things from our
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past
. Our society is
heavily
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centred
around the concept of faith and religion. And it is a fact that
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a lot of
these religious values are orthodox and regressive.
However
,
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positive
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changes
are
being made
, where we are
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continously
being more open to
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different
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human
perspectives and discarding these archaic and orthodox norms.
Therefore
, one
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must
try not to re-learn or even explore these values ever again. Acceptance of LGBTQ community in our world and their liberation movement is one such example. We
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have to
be more accepting and
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move
forward with our
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lives
, without ever going back to the haunting past.

Hence
, I believe that in
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some
cases, it is crucial for us to learn from the
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past
.
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But
in other cases, we
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have to
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ignore
the
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past
and be
mindfully
living in the
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present
. Like a majority of the questions that
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humans
have posed, there is no one right or
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wrong
answer to this either.
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IELTS essay It is always said that a person living in his past is never happy with his present life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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