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Tourism advantages and disadvantages

Tourism advantages and disadvantages GNNWj
Tourism is simply traveling to deferent town, country. visiting new countries and places become a new trend for spending vacations lately. Tourism allows tourists to be aware of deferent culture and traditions. also, allows them to experience deferent weather, nature …etc Tourism nowadays tend to be seasonal depends on the country weather mostly. tourists usually choose summer as an annual time for traveling. On the other hand some choose traveling in important occasions like graduation and honey moon Tourism has many benefits on country economy because its offers a lot of jobs to the citizens, so it has a distinct impact on county development. However, strong countries economy should not depend on tourism only, because in pandemics travelling would be abended which going to effect the country economy negatively. Modern countries tend to improve the tourism section because its consider as an essential element for well developed countries. To sum up, we can say that tourism has its advantages and disadvantages.
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simply
traveling to
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deferent
town,
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country
.
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visiting
new
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countries
and places become a new trend for spending vacations lately.
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Tourism
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allows
tourists to be aware of
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deferent
culture and traditions.
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also
,
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allows
them to experience
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deferent
weather, nature …etc

Tourism nowadays tend to be seasonal depends on the
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country
weather
mostly
.
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tourists
usually
choose summer as an annual time for traveling.
On the other hand
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some
choose traveling in
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important
occasions like graduation and
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honey moon


Tourism has
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many
benefits on
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country
economy
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because
its offers
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a lot of
jobs to the citizens,
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so
it has a distinct impact on county development.
However
, strong
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countries
economy should not depend on
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tourism
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only
,
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because
in pandemics travelling would be
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abended
which going to effect the
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country
economy
negatively
.

Modern
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countries
tend to
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improve
the
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tourism
section
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because
its consider as an essential element for well
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developed countries
.

To sum up, we can say that
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tourism
has its advantages and disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Tourism advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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