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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons?

More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? 3AAbn
There is an increase in trend with people to purchase apparels, automobiles, mobile phones and many more, that too of reputed and known manfucaturers. According to me, assurance of product quality and its assocation with social status are the major causes of this change. At the same time, it has some unnoticed drawbacks of creating discrimination among the society and unjustifed rise of the product cost. There are always good side to buy stuff from renowned producer. firstly, it assures buyer about the quality of the product by providing post sales services amd warranties, which helps customer in resolving any product related problems. for instance, last year i bought apple wrist watch to mointer my daily activites like heart beat and calorie burn, though there were multiple product available in the market but i want to make sure that, i should have best which gives quality and assure me its servies. Secondly, it give an edge over others in terms of the status uplifment. People do judge other majory from their belongings and form perception on that basis. More expensive and branded stuff you carry, more people start tagging qualities in you. Like, In my school, students those wore Nike shoes are considered as trendy and cool because they have a branded stuff, which set them apart from those wearing local shoes. Thus gives a status within the same class and school. Deep down it causes some serious problems. on problem is of creating discimination among the sociey. people start differentiating between each other because of their posession. It divides society into segments. for example, At the time of buying of car from showroom, a sales representative do give more respect and hospitality to cusotmers, who wore branded clothes and accesories that those wearing and carrying normal stuff. Branding a necessary product sometime making its cost unjustifically high. all essential medical products are necessity for patients and brand do make their price quite high because experts suggest to buy branded product. This will lead to unaccessibility of someone in need and may end with deaths sometimes. For example, during covid 19, people do by philips oxygen concentraters, which cost them around Rs 80, 000, two times higher than the actual cost, thus lead to death of some, who were not able to afford the same. In conclusion, purchasing an known manufacturer product assures as best of quality and upliftment of status, but i should not cosidered as the cost of setting up difference among the people and accessibililty to few due to its high cost.
There is an increase in trend with
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people
to
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purchase
apparels, automobiles, mobile phones and
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many
more, that too of reputed and known
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manfucaturers
.
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According to me
, assurance of
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product
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quality
and its
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assocation
with social
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status
are the major causes of this
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change
. At the same time, it has
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some
unnoticed drawbacks of creating discrimination among the society and
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unjustifed
rise of the
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product
cost.

There are always
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good
side to
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buy
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stuff
from renowned producer.
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firstly
, it assures buyer about the
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quality
of the
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product
by providing post sales services
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amd
warranties, which
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helps
customer in resolving any
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product
related problems.
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for
instance, last year
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i
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bought
apple wrist
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watch
to
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mointer
my daily
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activites
like heart beat and calorie burn, though there were multiple
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product
available in the market
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but
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i
want to
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make
sure that,
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i
should have best which
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gives
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quality
and assure me its
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servies
.
Secondly
, it
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give
an edge over others in terms of the
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status
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uplifment
.
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People
do judge other
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majory
from their belongings and form perception on that basis. More expensive and
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branded
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stuff
you carry, more
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people
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start
tagging
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qualities
in you. Like, In my school, students those wore Nike shoes
are considered
as trendy and cool
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because
they have a
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branded
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stuff
, which set them apart from those wearing local shoes.
Thus
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gives
a
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status
within the same
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class
and school.

Deep down it causes
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some
serious problems.
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on
problem is of creating
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discimination
among the
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sociey
.
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people
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start
differentiating between each other
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because
of their
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posession
. It divides society into segments.
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for
example, At the time of buying of car from showroom, a sales representative do
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give
more respect and hospitality to
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cusotmers
, who wore
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branded
clothes and
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accesories
that those wearing and carrying normal
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stuff
. Branding a necessary
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product
sometime making its
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cost
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unjustifically
high.
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all
essential medical
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products
are necessity for patients and brand do
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make
their price quite high
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because
experts suggest to
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buy
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branded
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product
. This will lead to
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unaccessibility
of someone in need and may
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end
with deaths
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sometimes
.
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, during
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covid 19
,
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people
do by
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philips
oxygen
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concentraters
, which
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cost
them around Rs 80, 000, two times higher than the actual
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cost
,
thus
lead to death of
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some
, who were not able to afford the same.

In conclusion
, purchasing
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an
known manufacturer
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product
assures as best of
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quality
and
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upliftment
of
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status
,
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but
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i
should not
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cosidered
as the
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cost
of setting up difference among the
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people
and
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accessibililty
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to
few due to its high
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cost
.
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IELTS essay More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
425 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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