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some people believe that if is best to accept a bad situation. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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Q some people believe that if is best to accept a bad situation. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. From my perspectives, people who think wisely they take all opportunities to improve bad conditions such as lack of money and unsatisfactory job duties. However, there are many people who believe not to take any risk because of fear of loosing that much amount of money too. This kind of thinkers believe in sticking at the bad situations till they get new experience which could be capable of improving the most personal skills and confidence to get by undergoing bad situations. This essay will look at both aspects of argue and will reach to the best conclusion. To talk about accepting bad situation, most of people are wasting their skills and time by not going against the pressurised work polices. For an instance, if an employee has been working for an organization from last 5 years and still he is not getting all benefits of health and vacation pay, he is wasting his all skills and endeavours by waiting. Moreover, if he tries to get at other agency he can surely get with all benefits and more worthy job for him. However, all people are not brave enough to take the decisions quickly as they might can have responsibilities of their families and afraid from not getting other job as soon as possible. They still believe in fate and prefer to go with the flow by accepting the current situations. Fear is the main lesion of not going to change the work place other than low confidence which is enough obvious since this era is of global competition. If one employee leave the job there are numerous options available to the organization for recruitment. I pen down here by stating that people should go with change to accept challenges if they want to grow in this fast pace of environment, but at the same time they also should take decision wisely and according to the situation.
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that if is best to accept a
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bad
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. Others argue that it is better to
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such situations.

From my perspectives,
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people
who
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think
wisely
they take all opportunities to
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improve
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bad
conditions such as lack of money and unsatisfactory
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job
duties.
However
, there are
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many
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people
who
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believe
not to take any
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risk
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of fear of loosing that much amount of money too. This kind of thinkers
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believe
in sticking at the
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bad
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situations
till they
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get
new experience which could be capable of improving the most personal
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skills
and confidence to
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get
by undergoing
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bad
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situations
. This essay will look at both aspects of argue and will reach to the best conclusion.

To talk about accepting
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bad
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situation
, most of
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people
are wasting their
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skills
and time by not going against the
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pressurised
work polices. For an instance, if an employee has been working for an organization from last 5 years and
still
he is not getting all benefits of health and vacation pay, he is wasting his all
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skills
and
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endeavours
by waiting.
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, if he tries to
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get
at
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other
agency he can
surely
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get
with all benefits and more worthy
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job
for him.

However
, all
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people
are not brave
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enough
to take the decisions
quickly
as they
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might can
have responsibilities of their families and
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afraid from
not getting
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other
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job
as
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soon
as possible. They
still
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believe
in fate and prefer to
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go with
the flow by accepting the
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current
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situations
. Fear is the main lesion of not going to
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change
the work place
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other
than low confidence which is
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enough
obvious since this era is of global competition. If one employee
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leave
the
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job
there are numerous options available to the organization for recruitment.

I pen down here by stating that
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people
should
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go with
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change
to accept challenges if they want to grow in this
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fast
pace of environment,
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but
at the same time they
also
should take decision
wisely
and according to the
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situation
.
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IELTS essay some people believe that if is best to accept a bad situation. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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