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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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It is widely believed that advertisement serves no purpose as people purchase products according to their needs. But, I completely disagree with this statement. According to me advertisements provide information about the new and upcoming products in the market. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain how advertisements at times help to form better choices about the products. Firstly, advertisements help to create awareness about new and upgraded products in the market. It helps keep the consumer updated about the variety of products available in the market at affordable prices. For example, advertisements helped Kindle to promote its business to a wide range of customers. Similarly, through advertisements, new companies get a chance to endorse their products to unknown consumers and increase their reach. Secondly, advertisements can be beneficial for both sellers and consumers. Sellers can promote their goods and services through advertisements, and consumers can know the information of goods and discount deals in the market. Moreover, it helps consumers to make more informed decisions. Also, consumers grow aware of brands that cater their needs better from the advertisements. It also helps businesses to build brand recognition. Although advertisements help create awareness, they induce a sense of urgency and desire by targeting the consumer's psychology. In conclusion, companies certainly fool their consumers through fancy advertisements. But I can't entirely agree with the belief that advertisements do not serve any purpose. Indeed, there are good and bad advertisements. Still, it plays a very significant role in society by helping companies create more awareness amongst the consumers about the availability of products.
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widely
believed that
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serves no purpose as
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people
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purchase
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products
according to their needs.
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But
, I completely disagree with this statement.
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According to me
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provide information about the new and upcoming
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products
in the
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market
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall
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explain
how
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at times
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help
to form better choices about the products.

Firstly
,
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help
to create awareness about new and upgraded
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products
in the
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market
. It
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helps
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keep
the
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consumer
updated about the variety of
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products
available in the
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market
at affordable prices.
For example
,
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advertisements
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helped
Kindle to promote its business to a wide range of customers.
Similarly
, through
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, new
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companies
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get
a chance to endorse their
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products
to unknown
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consumers
and increase their reach.

Secondly
,
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can be beneficial for both sellers and
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consumers
. Sellers can promote their
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goods
and services through
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advertisements
, and
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consumers
can know the information of
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goods
and discount deals in the
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market
.
Moreover
, it
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helps
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consumers
to
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make
more informed decisions.
Also
,
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consumers
grow aware of brands that cater their needs better from the
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advertisements
. It
also
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helps
businesses to build brand recognition. Although
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advertisements
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help
create awareness, they induce a sense of urgency and desire by targeting the consumer's psychology.

In conclusion
,
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companies
certainly
fool their
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consumers
through fancy
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.
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I can't
entirely
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agree
with the belief that
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do not serve any purpose.
Indeed
, there are
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good
and
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bad
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advertisements
.
Still
, it plays a
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very
significant role in society by helping
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companies
create more awareness amongst the
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consumers
about the availability of
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products
.

IELTS essay People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. with it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
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