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some people believe that hospital is good opportunity for individual to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Hospital is play big role in masses life. Several people say that it is beneficial for people and other oppose them. In this essay i strongly agree and my inclination is justified in upcoming paragraph To commence with, there are number of advantage of medical services. In other words hospital not only prevent our life from diseases but also a give good opportunity to unemployment person like assistant and cleaning worker and other.
Hospital is play
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big
role in masses life. Several
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people
say that it is beneficial for
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people
and other oppose them. In this essay
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i
strongly
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agree
and my inclination
is justified
in upcoming
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
paragraph


To commence with, there are number of advantage of medical services.
In other words
hospital not
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only
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prevent
our life from diseases
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but
also
a give
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good
opportunity to unemployment person like assistant and cleaning worker and other.
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IELTS essay some people believe that hospital is good opportunity for individual

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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