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Some people believe that history is a waste of time others belive that it is worh studying. Discuss both views and provide suggestions.

Some people believe that history is a waste of time others belive that it is worh studying. 8a2XP
History is regarded as the study about the past. Every country has got its own history which basically focuses on the key events from the future. The current generation has got different aspects about the study of history. The future depends on the past, the mistakes made by various leaders can be learnt from history and can be prevented, leading to a better future. History provides an inner eye about our forefathers and the struggles they faced to what we see and enjoy today. School curriculum should include the freedom struggles faced by various countries especially in Africa and Asia. The two great world wars and the formation of United nations, are indispensable incidents which every individual on the earth should be aware about. History is priceless like on-hand experience and hence requires time and intelligence to decode it. On the other hand, some people believe that history is just a waste of time. Modern world, which is moving at a greater speed requires innovative thinking skills and robotic working abilities. Time is valuable, it cannot be wasted by studying events from the future as the challenges to be faced are much competitive and dangerous than the future. The upcoming challenges can only be faced by upcoming solutions which can never be found in the past. We can never make a bright past but a bright future is always our vision. To conclude, historical information is worth studying but we should also be ready to accept the current truth and move forward with confidence and determination. A open-mind towards future along with a strong back-up form the history is the need of the generation.
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aspects about the study of history.

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, the mistakes made by various leaders can be
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history
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, leading to a better
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provides an inner eye about our forefathers and the struggles they
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to what we
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and enjoy
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. School curriculum should include the freedom struggles
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by various countries
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in Africa and Asia. The two great world wars and the formation of
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United nations
, are indispensable incidents which every individual on the earth should be aware about.
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History
is priceless like on-hand experience and
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skills
and robotic working abilities. Time is valuable, it cannot
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events
from the
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as the challenges to be
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are much competitive and
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than the
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. The upcoming challenges can
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by upcoming solutions which can never
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in the
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. We can never
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a bright
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a bright
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is always our vision.

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we should
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be ready to accept the
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truth and
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forward with confidence and determination.
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is the need of the generation.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that history is a waste of time others belive that it is worh studying.

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