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Nowadayse crime rate is increasing among youngsters, describe it.

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There is no doubt that crime rate is increasing specially in teenagers, and no body can deny that It has become a phenomenon worldwide and is a big problem for the society. Youngsters are more educated these days and they want to have a job as per tgeir study and equivalent but unluckily there is no job vacancies for their better future, due to their bad luck and living under this pressure youth is indulging themselves in such kind of bad habits of drug abuse. Political leaders are responsible for this bad situation created in the pathway of teenagers for not creating the job opportunities and they prefer to give jobs to their voters after getting more values and access money from them and for this people who are deserving deserving are remained with empty hands. Due to this teenagers are committing crimes in the society and spoiling their careers. In conclusion, nowadays crime rate is increasing in the group of youngsters due to having no jobs opportunities and a big corruption in political class to influence on the job creature departments to provide opportunities only to their own voters.
There is no doubt that crime rate is increasing
specially
in
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teenagers
, and
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no body
can deny that It has become a phenomenon worldwide and is a
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big
problem for the society. Youngsters are more educated these
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days and
they want to have a
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job
as per
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tgeir
study and equivalent
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but
unluckily
there is no
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job
vacancies for their better future, due to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
luck and living under this pressure youth is indulging themselves in such kind of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
habits of drug abuse. Political leaders are responsible for this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
situation created in the pathway of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
for not creating the
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job
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opportunities and
they prefer to give
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jobs
to their voters after getting more values and access money from them and for this
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people
who
The verb 'deserving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are deserving
deserving
are remained
with empty hands. Due to
Did you mean "these"?
this
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teenagers
are committing crimes in the society and spoiling their careers.
In conclusion
, nowadays crime rate is increasing in the group of youngsters due to having no
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jobs
opportunities and a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
corruption in political
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class
to influence on the
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job
creature departments to provide opportunities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
voters.
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IELTS essay Nowadayse crime rate is increasing among youngsters, describe it.

Essay
  American English
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190 words
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