One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that children in schools ought to be taught academic subjects such as physics and math, while there are others who argue that schools should have applied subjects like bakery. In my opinion, while schools mostly have academic subjects, I believe that children should choose what to study by themselves.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that schools teach children to academic subjects as it is beneficial for them in future life. In other words, subject such as math and physics are essential for all individuals as it helps to enter to the university or to secure a good job. For example, in Uzbekistan children at high school have math lessons every day, as in order to enter to any university students should pass math exams.
On the other hand, according to some, children should learn applied subjects as bakery as it can help them to find a job straight after school. This is because bakery industry is the most developing sphere in business world and companies suffer in order to find employees. As a result, companies and businesses hire young people to their business right after the school.
Finally, I consider that children should choose the subjects to learn by themselves. As only children know what kind of jobs do they want to have in future and what kind of talents do they want to improve. Another point to consider is that when people make a choice by themselves they feel more happier.
In conclusion, although math and physics can help children to secure a good job in future and become successful, I consider that all children should have a freedom of choice.
One of the
widely
discussed issues nowadays is that
children
in
schools
ought to
be taught
academic
subjects
such as physics and
math
, while there are others who argue that
schools
should have applied
subjects
like bakery. In my opinion, while
schools
mostly
have academic
subjects
, I believe that
children
should choose what to study by themselves.
On the one hand, it is
commonly
believed that
schools
teach
children
to academic
subjects
as it is beneficial for them in future life.
In other words
,
subject
such as
math
and physics are essential for all individuals as it
helps
to enter to the university or to secure a
good
job
.
For example
, in Uzbekistan
children
at high
school
have
math
lessons every day, as in order to enter to any university students should pass
math
exams.
On the other hand
, according to
some
,
children
should learn applied
subjects
as bakery as it can
help them to find
a
job
straight after
school
. This is
because
bakery industry is the most developing sphere in business world and
companies
suffer in order to find employees.
As a result
,
companies
and businesses hire young
people
to their business right after the school.
Finally
, I consider that
children
should choose the
subjects
to learn by themselves. As
only
children
know what kind of
jobs
do they want to have in future and what kind of talents do they want to
improve
. Another point to consider is that when
people
make
a choice by themselves they feel
more happier
.
In conclusion
, although
math
and physics can
help
children
to secure a
good
job
in future and become successful, I consider that all
children
should have
a freedom
of choice.
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