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Some people believe that hard work is the key to success. Others Chink that success is a matter of luck. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Some people believe that hard work is the key to success. Others Chink that success is a matter of luck. Y2xYB
The question of whether success is a consequence of persistent hard work or sheer luck has been a matter of debate since time immemorial. This dilemma divides people into two groups-one group believing in the fact that success has everything to do with hard work and nothing to do with good fortune, while the other believing in just the opposite. In my opinion, success is an amalgamation of several factors, including both hard work and luck. As far as the importance of hard work is concerned, success is virtually impossible to achieve without persistent and focused efforts. There is a reason why they say 'Rome was not built in a day. ' It takes years and years of tenacious, patient, consistent, and laborious efforts to make it big. This is evidenced by every success story we come across from Dhirubhai Ambani to Bill Gates, from Shah Rukh Khan to Leonardo Di Caprio, from Arijit Singh to Lady Gaga, from Kapil Dev to Cristiano Ronaldo - you name any achiever and their success story will prove that success is not an overnight event but a result of consistent hard work. But there are quite a few individuals out there who believe that success is impossible to achieve without good fortune. There is no denying the fact that being present at the right place at the right time, which many call 'luck', is pivotal. On a daily basis, we come across countless people who have been toiling hard all their lives but find it difficult to make their ends meet, let alone make it big. For instance, the domestic helpers working at our homes, the labourers toiling all day long at construction sites, the taxi drivers who have been plying to and fro for years and so many more. The list is endless. In my view, success is too complex a concept to be a result of just hard work or luck. It is the consequence of several factors, including both good fortune and laborious efforts. According to me, it is of utmost importance to have luck on your side but it is equally important to work hard. I believe when these two factors are in place, success always follows.
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The question of whether
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is a consequence of persistent
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work
or sheer luck has been a matter of debate since time immemorial. This dilemma divides
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people
into two groups-one group believing in the fact that
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success
has everything to do with
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hard
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work
and nothing to do with
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good
fortune, while the other believing in
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the opposite. In my opinion,
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success
is an amalgamation of several factors, including both
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hard
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work
and luck.

As far as the importance of
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hard
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work
is concerned
,
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success
is
virtually
impossible to achieve without persistent and focused efforts. There is a reason why they say 'Rome was not built in a day. ' It takes years and years of tenacious, patient, consistent, and laborious efforts to
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make
it
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. This
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by every
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success
story we
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across from
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Dhirubhai
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Ambani
to Bill Gates, from Shah
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Rukh
Khan to Leonardo Di
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, from
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Arijit
Singh to Lady Gaga, from
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Kapil
Dev to Cristiano Ronaldo
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you name any achiever and their
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story will prove that
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success
is not an overnight
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event
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a result of consistent
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hard
work.

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there are quite a few individuals out there who believe that
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success
is impossible to achieve without
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good
fortune. There is no denying the fact that being present at the right place at the right time, which
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many
call 'luck', is pivotal. On a daily basis, we
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come
across countless
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people
who have been toiling
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hard
all their
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lives
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but
find it difficult to
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make
their ends
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meet
,
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let
alone
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make
it
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big
.
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labourers
toiling all day long at construction sites, the taxi drivers who have been plying to and fro for years and
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so
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more. The list is endless.

In my view,
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success
is too complex a concept to be a result of
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just
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hard
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work
or luck. It is the consequence of several factors, including both
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good
fortune and laborious efforts.
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According to me
, it is of utmost importance to have luck on your side
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but
it is
equally
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important
to
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work
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hard
. I believe when these two factors are in place,
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success
always follows.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that hard work is the key to success. Others Chink that success is a matter of luck.

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4 paragraphs
368 words
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