Whether the government should restore old buildings or not has always sparked a heated debate. Some people argue that instead of restoring old buildings, the government should build new roads and other structures. While I admit that restoration of ancient buildings involves a huge amount of money, spending on them is as important as building new roads and structures.
There are numerous reasons to support this view point. First of all, the old buildings depict our history and culture of people of ancient times. For example, the architecture and artistic work of old buildings are rare to find nowadays. Hence, they must be conserved. Moreover, we must preserve historical constructions for our future generations and understand that even if one piece is destroyed, it is destroyed forever. These buildings have their own character which we can’t replicate in modern architecture. Another benefit of preserving these heritage buildings is that they can be converted into tourist attractions.
However, in spite of these benefits, there are some analysts who argue that it is more important to spend money on constructing new infrastructure rather than renovate old buildings. According to them, the hard earned money they give to the government in the form of taxes must be spent on something that is beneficial to them like new roads or flyovers. Since renovations involve a huge amount of money, they feel new buildings should be constructed as per the modern architecture and needs of the society.
In conclusion, although preserving ancient buildings involves a substantial amount of money, I insist that they must be preserved because they are reminders of our culture and heritage.
Whether the
government
should restore
old
buildings
or not has always sparked a heated debate.
Some
people
argue that
instead
of restoring
old
buildings
, the
government
should build
new
roads and other structures. While I admit that restoration of ancient
buildings
involves a huge amount of
money
, spending on them is as
important
as
building
new
roads and structures.
There are numerous reasons to support this view point.
First of all
, the
old
buildings
depict our history and culture of
people
of ancient times.
For example
, the architecture and artistic work of
old
buildings
are rare to find nowadays.
Hence
, they
must
be conserved
.
Moreover
, we
must
preserve historical constructions for our future generations and understand that even if one piece is
destroyed
, it is
destroyed
forever. These
buildings
have their
own
character which we can’t replicate in modern architecture. Another benefit of preserving these heritage
buildings
is that they can
be converted
into tourist attractions.
However
,
in spite of
these benefits, there are
some
analysts who argue that it is more
important
to spend
money
on constructing
new
infrastructure
rather
than renovate
old
buildings
. According to them, the
hard earned
money
they give to the
government
in the form of taxes
must
be spent
on something
that is
beneficial to them like
new
roads or flyovers. Since renovations involve a huge amount of
money
, they feel
new
buildings
should
be constructed
as per the modern architecture and needs of the society.
In conclusion
, although preserving ancient
buildings
involves a substantial amount of
money
, I insist that they
must
be preserved
because
they are reminders of our culture and heritage.
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