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Some people believe that gambling should be licensed and regulated rather than illegal. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion.

Some people believe that gambling should be licensed and regulated rather than illegal. Give reasons for your opinion. weXRm
There have been heated debates about whether gambling should be banned. However, this essay is of the opinion that the government needs to ban gambling or at least it should be tightly controlled. Analyzing its drawbacks to show an uncivilized community if everyone all gamble will prove this thesis true. It is agreed that gambling is irrational and reckless. As you know, gambling seems to have a strange attraction, gamblers will always have a great chance of winning but there is a high chance that they will lose money but the more they lose money, the more they start playing with more hoping to recoup the capital they have suffered a heavy loss. Casinos calculate their odds so that they will always make a profit. Gambling attracts people with a little money who are desperate for a windfall. These are the people who can least afford to lose money. They should be protected from the temptation to gamble. Gamble should be banned or at least tightly controlled. At the same time, I do not think that gambing is just psychologically addictive in some people. Many people end up gambling to try to recover money they have already lost. This is known as 'chasing losses'. It results in people staking more and more money, most of which they will lose. Gambling addicts often turn to crime to feed their addiction. Addiction is highly damaging to families, since gamblers will spend whatever money they can on gambling. People start to gamble without thinking that they will become addicted. Once they become addicted, it is too late. Obviously, Ben Affleck who plays Batman, is an equally scandalous name when it comes to gambling addiction. He lost $400, 000 to Ron Meyer, President of Universal Studios. In 2015, when she filed for divorce from the actor, actress Jennifer Garner listed her husband's gambling and alcohol addiction as two of the reasons why she left him. Clearly, gambling is a serious thing and as with drugs, it is better to ban gambling to stop people getting started in the first place. In conclusion, people can come to gambling for fun entertainment but do not overdo it to make a lot of money and the government should have stricter control policies on gambling.
There have
been heated
debates about whether
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gambling
should
be banned
.
However
, this essay is of the opinion that the
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government
needs to ban
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gambling
or at least it should be
tightly
controlled. Analyzing its drawbacks to
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show
an uncivilized community if everyone all
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gamble
will prove this thesis true.

It is
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agreed
that
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gambling
is irrational and reckless. As you know,
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gambling
seems to have a strange attraction, gamblers will always have a great chance of winning
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but
there is a high chance that they will
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lose
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money
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but
the more they
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lose
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money
, the more they
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start
playing with more hoping to recoup the capital they have suffered a heavy loss. Casinos calculate their odds
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so
that they will always
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make
a profit.
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attracts
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people
with a
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little
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money
who are desperate for a windfall. These are the
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people
who can least afford to
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lose
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money
. They should
be protected
from the temptation to
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gamble
.
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Gamble
should
be banned
or at least
tightly
controlled.

At the same time, I do not
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think
that
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gambing
is
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just
psychologically
addictive in
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some
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people
.
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Many
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people
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end
up
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gambling
to try to recover
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money
they have already lost. This
is known
as 'chasing losses'. It results in
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people
staking more and more
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money
, most of which they will
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lose
.
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Gambling
addicts
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often
turn to crime to feed their addiction. Addiction is
highly
damaging to families, since gamblers will spend whatever
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money
they can on
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gambling
.
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People
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start
to
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gamble
without thinking that they will become addicted. Once they become addicted, it is too late.
Obviously
, Ben
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Affleck
who plays Batman, is an
equally
scandalous name when it
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comes
to
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gambling
addiction. He lost $400, 000 to Ron Meyer, President of Universal Studios. In 2015, when she filed for divorce from the actor, actress Jennifer Garner listed her husband's
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gambling
and alcohol addiction as two of the reasons why she
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left
him.
Clearly
,
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gambling
is a serious thing and as with drugs, it is better to ban
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gambling
to
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stop
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people
getting
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started
in the
first
place.

In conclusion
,
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people
can
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come
to
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gambling
for fun entertainment
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but
do not overdo it to
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make
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a lot of
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money
and the
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government
should have stricter control policies on
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gambling
.

IELTS essay Some people believe that gambling should be licensed and regulated rather than illegal. Give reasons for your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
377 words
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