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People believe that newspaper and books are outdated.give your opinion

People believe that newspaper and books are outdated. give your opinion 1oPXq
In today's era, due to the advancenent of science and technology many individuals are of the notion that printed works, periodicals, magazines and novels. According to my view, I think it may depends on a personal preference, because lots of choose electronic books over printed resource. so I suggest both are equally crucial as both have its own pros and cones, which is justified in ensuing paragraphs. To begin with, the foremost reason that majority of humans are consuming social media so they does not like to read news from newspapers and other articles. ; as it is time consuming while internet provides information effectively through videos. Another reason which plays a major role that printed media gives news on next day while social websites, pages and channels on youtube give updates at the next moment of any latest political, scientific and economic activities which happens worldwide. On the controdery, several smart minds considers a text book, inspirational books and biographies of any successful person as a vital part of their life. And I actually accept this because I also choose books and magazines many times, which increased my reading capabilities. As their is saying that "Reading is Leading". Although it consumes more time and seems boring sometimes, but it gives the feeling of satisfaction. Not only this, but it also increases the concentration power and understanding skills of children if they developed the habit of reading. And almost most of the successful personalities read everyday. To wrap up the discussion, I opined that however, in this 21st century most of the population losing the habit of reading through books due to scientific learning equipments like computers, smarphones and laptops; they should also spend their small amount of time in reading
In
today
's era, due to the
advancenent
of science and technology
many
individuals are of the notion that printed works, periodicals, magazines and novels. According to my view, I
think
it may
depends
on a personal preference,
because
lots of choose electronic
books
over printed resource.
so
I suggest both are
equally
crucial as both have its
own
pros and cones, which
is justified
in ensuing paragraphs.

To
begin
with, the foremost reason that majority of humans are consuming social media
so
they
does
not like to read news from newspapers and other articles.
;
as it is
time consuming
while internet provides information
effectively
through videos. Another reason which plays a major role that printed media gives news on
next
day while social websites, pages and channels on
youtube
give updates at the
next
moment of any latest political, scientific and economic activities which happens worldwide.

On the
controdery
, several smart minds considers a text
book
, inspirational
books
and biographies of any successful person as a vital part of their life. And I actually accept this
because
I
also
choose
books
and magazines
many
times
, which increased my
reading
capabilities.
As
their
is saying that
"
Reading is Leading
"
. Although it consumes more
time
and seems boring
sometimes
,
but
it gives the feeling of satisfaction. Not
only
this,
but
it
also
increases the concentration power and understanding
skills
of children if they developed the habit of
reading
. And almost most of the successful personalities read
everyday
.

To wrap up the discussion, I opined that
however
, in this 21st century most of the population losing the habit of
reading
through
books
due to scientific learning equipments like computers,
smarphones
and laptops; they should
also
spend their
small
amount of
time
in
reading
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IELTS essay People believe that newspaper and books are outdated. give your opinion

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4 paragraphs
290 words
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