A lion's share of people believes that insisting young minds to have a sense of competition would help them to do better in everything they pursue, while others think that the mentality of working together is the best option to train children to be successful. This essay shall elucidate my agreement with the later statement because, in my opinion, the desire to thrive better than peers may add exorbitant pressure and stress in youngsters, whereas encouragement to work together as a team will bring in a plethora of confidence.
Firstly, a side effect of competitive nature is excessive pressure on students to outperform their mates. Thereby, they will be going through unwanted stress and struggle from a very tender age. This would not just affect their overall curriculum performances, but also confidence as scare of failure may restrict students from giving their 100 percent. For instance, according to a report by Times Now, 70 percent of the students in the USA think that thoughts about results confine them from achieving good marks than the actual preparation for the exam.
On the other hand, if children are motivated to exhibit an attitude of mingling together and working to do well by helping one another, then I believe, it would incessantly benefit every individual in the team to perform well and thereby, gain confidence through sense of self-attainment and relaxed state of mind. As a work of coordination have been proven to enhance the pleasure of task achievement, it is irrefutable that adolescents who finish their task through group work, gain more self confidence than those who work alone.
In conclusion, although a majority of people believe that the sense of competition will enhance the outcome in youngsters, In my perspective, children are supposed to be taught to work together with a mindset of cooperation, as it will benefit them in being confident and also will refrain going through conspicuous stress and pressure out of competition.
A lion's share of
people
believes that insisting young minds to have a sense of competition would
help
them to do better in everything they pursue, while others
think
that the mentality of working together is the best option to train children to be successful. This essay shall elucidate my agreement with the later statement
because
, in my opinion, the desire to thrive better than peers may
add
exorbitant pressure and
stress
in youngsters, whereas encouragement to
work
together as a team will bring in a plethora of confidence.
Firstly
, a side effect of competitive nature is excessive pressure on students to outperform their mates. Thereby, they will be going
through
unwanted
stress
and struggle from a
very
tender age. This would not
just
affect their
overall
curriculum performances,
but
also
confidence as scare of failure may restrict students from giving their 100 percent.
For instance
, according to a report by Times
Now
, 70 percent of the students in the USA
think
that thoughts about results confine them from achieving
good
marks than the actual preparation for the exam.
On the other hand
, if children
are motivated
to exhibit an attitude of mingling together and working to do well by helping one another, then I believe, it would
incessantly
benefit every individual in the team to perform well and thereby, gain confidence
through
sense of self-attainment and relaxed state of mind. As a
work
of coordination have
been proven
to enhance the pleasure of task achievement, it is irrefutable that adolescents who finish their task
through
group
work
, gain more
self confidence
than those who
work
alone.
In conclusion
, although a majority of
people
believe that the sense of competition will enhance the outcome in youngsters, In my perspective, children
are supposed
to
be taught
to
work
together with a mindset of cooperation, as it will benefit them in being confident and
also
will refrain going
through
conspicuous
stress
and pressure out of competition.