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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples v.2

Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples v. 2
In the past, most people preferred only direct communication, at present, every human communicate via various media like telephone, e-mails and other social media. As a result, this pattern increases day by day and people forget the real value of face to face communication. I agree with the suggestions that face to face communication is better than written communication. This essay analysed the which way is better for communication. The most prominent reason behind may stand is that, direct communication prove the real value of communication to the other person. This reason is taken into account because face to face communication is much effective way to communicate by using physical gesture, emotions and handful words. In other words, people could able to express their real value of talk using their emotions and physical movements. So, both communicators could understand the exact situation of the message. Direct communication is greater way to understand the fact which is real or not. Secondly, this is effective way to express and understand facts to both communicators. Hense, face to face communication is most effective way to understand feelings and other express an emotions. For instance, in job interview, when job seeker attend personal interview, attitude, physical gesture and manners is most important media to express the real value of talk. On the other hand, today people communicate via different media like Facebook and whatsapp. It is fruitless way to demonstrate the feelings. For example, if communicators communicate via e-mails and other media, sometimes they cannot able to understand real facts. Sometimes communicators could not catch the lie and real value of talk. As a consequence, misunderstandings are occurs between two individuals. In conclusion, I believe that sometimes it is fine to written communication, but face to face communication is much superior way to communicate instead of using mediator in our daily lives.
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preferred
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direct
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communication
, at present, every human
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communicate
via various
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media
like telephone, e-mails and
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other
social
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media
.
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, this pattern increases day by day and
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people
forget the
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real
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value
of
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face
to
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face
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communication
. I
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agree
with the suggestions that
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communication
is better than written
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. This essay
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the which way is better for communication.

The most prominent reason behind may stand is that, direct
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communication
prove the
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real
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value
of
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communication
to the
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other
person. This reason
is taken
into account
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to
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is much effective way to
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communicate
by using physical gesture, emotions and handful words. In
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words,
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people
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express
their
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real
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value
of talk using their emotions and physical movements.
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, both communicators could
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understand
the exact situation of the message. Direct
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communication
is
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way to
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understand
the fact which is
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real
or not.
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, this is
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way to
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express
and
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understand
facts to both communicators.
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,
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is
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effective way to
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feelings and
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of talk.

On the
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people
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like Facebook and
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. It is
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way to demonstrate the feelings.
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, if communicators
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,
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they
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real
facts.
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communicators could not catch the lie and
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value
of talk. As a consequence, misunderstandings are occurs between two individuals.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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it is fine to written
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,
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to
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is much superior way to
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instead
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.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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