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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. v.6

Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. v. 6
While written communications are widely used these days for personal and business relationships, some argue in favor of face to face meetings. I personally believe in the power of in-person relationships and the reasoning behind my logic will be provided in the following paragraphs. In-person communication has several advantages in our personal and business relationships. Firstly, written measures have limited capabilities in transferring emotions and opinions. For instance, some demographics, such as the people with low levels of literacy, children or foreign workers, have a low ability to convey their thoughts, making the written practice more challenging in many cases. However, in face to face relation, people could transfer their opinions with more flexibility by using physical gestures and body language. The likelihood of misunderstanding and conflict between parties is also higher in written styles due to the generational and cultural differences. On the other hand, in face to face version, people could read each other' s non-verbal reactions, such as hesitation, tone, joy or anger. Admittedly, modern life has changes personal life and worldwide economy drastically and it is not possible to solely rely on face to face relationships anymore. In many cases, such as international firms or families who live apart, written communication is the only option available for a daily relationship. However, in the matter of powerfulness, the written relationship has various flaws and downsides. In conclusion, while it is undeniable facts that society needs written communication in the modern world, the strength and advantages of face to face relationships still outweigh its drawbacks.
While
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written
communications are
widely
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used
these days for personal and business
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relationships
,
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some
argue in favor of
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face
to
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face
meetings. I
personally
believe in the power of in-person
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relationships
and the reasoning behind my logic will
be provided
in the following paragraphs.

In-person
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communication
has several advantages in our personal and business
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relationships
.
Firstly
,
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written
measures have limited capabilities in transferring emotions and opinions.
For instance
,
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some
demographics, such as the
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people
with low levels of literacy, children or foreign workers, have a low ability to convey their thoughts, making the
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written
practice more challenging in
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many
cases.
However
, in
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face
to
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face
relation,
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people
could transfer their opinions with more flexibility by using physical gestures and body language. The likelihood of misunderstanding and conflict between parties is
also
higher in
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written
styles due to the generational and cultural differences.
On the other hand
, in
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face
to
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face
version,
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people
could read each
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Admittedly
, modern life has
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changes
personal life and worldwide economy
drastically
and it is not possible to
solely
rely on
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face
to
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face
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relationships
anymore. In
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many
cases, such as international firms or families who
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live
apart,
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written
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communication
is the
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only
option available for a daily
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relationship
.
However
, in the matter of
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powerfulness
, the
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written
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relationship
has various flaws and downsides.

In conclusion
, while it is undeniable facts that society needs
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written
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communication
in the modern world, the strength and advantages of
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face
to
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face
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relationships
still
outweigh its drawbacks.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS essay Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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