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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT’S YOUR OPINION?

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT’S YOUR OPINION? VrNa3
Artificial Intelligence based robots are increasingly replacing human occupations. While it is possible that robots would take over all menial jobs, it is unlikely that jobs requiring human interfacing will also be replaced by robots. This essay will discuss how some jobs can never be replaced by machines. Robots will eventually replace all human labour that does not require human intelligence. Companies would prefer to purchase an artificial intelligence machine instead of hiring, training and employing a human as it will save much money, time and efforts of the company and will also provide more accurate results than humans. For example, parking lots in America, the metering system has been upgraded to advanced metering infrastructure, in which now no humans are required to record the meter readings manually, instead the meter itself transfers the data to management and control center. In addition, all parking management systems in London are also replaced by automated machines, thus, eliminating the need of a human operator. For these reasons, these kind of jobs will be completely replaced by robots in future. Conversely, such jobs which require complex human skills and intelligence, can never be replaced by machines. It does not matters to what extent the industries move towards automation, at the end of the day, there will be a human who will be needed to control and supervise that “automated process. ” For instance, the Chicago Electric Supply has transformed its electric distribution infrastructure to a totally new automated and smart distribution system which has many automatic features, but that system requires a person to manage and supervise the operations. That is why even the most advanced automation system and robots cannot work with the interference of humans. Summing up, it is truth that robots will take over the most human employments. Unskilled labour will be totally replaced by machines; however sophisticated jobs that require human specific skills will always exist. Ultimately, very few jobs will be safe in an increasingly artificially intelligent workforce.
Artificial
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based robots are
increasingly
replacing
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human
occupations. While it is possible that robots would take over all menial
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jobs
, it is unlikely that
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jobs
requiring
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human
interfacing will
also
be replaced
by robots. This essay will discuss how
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some
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jobs
can never
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by machines.

Robots will
eventually
replace all
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human
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labour
that does not
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require
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human
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intelligence
.
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Companies
would prefer to
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purchase
an artificial
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intelligence
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machine
instead
of hiring, training and employing a
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human
as it will save much money, time and efforts of the
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company
and will
also
provide more accurate results than
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humans
.
For example
, parking lots in America, the metering
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system
has
been upgraded
to advanced metering infrastructure, in which
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now
no
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humans
are required
to record the meter readings
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,
instead
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, all parking management
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systems
in London are
also
replaced by automated
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machines
,
thus
, eliminating the need of a
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human
operator. For these reasons,
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these kind
of
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jobs
will be completely replaced by robots
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in future
.

Conversely
, such
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jobs
which
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require
complex
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human
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skills
and
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intelligence
, can never
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by
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machines
. It does not
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matters
to what extent the industries
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move
towards automation, at the
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end
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human
who will
be needed
to control and supervise that “automated process. ”
For instance
, the Chicago Electric Supply has transformed its electric distribution infrastructure to a
totally
new automated and smart distribution
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requires
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That is
why even the most advanced automation
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system
and robots cannot work with the interference of humans.

Summing up, it is truth that robots will take over the most
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human
employments. Unskilled
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labour
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totally
replaced by
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machines
;
however
sophisticated
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jobs
that
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require
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human
specific
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skills
will always exist.
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,
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very
few
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jobs
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increasingly
artificially
intelligent workforce.
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT’S YOUR OPINION?

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  American English
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330 words
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