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This thing is special to me

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There are plenty of things to make each one of us interested in. The most important thing for me is my computer I got when I was 15. I can use this computer in many kind of activity. Firstly, it's very convenient to study. If I do not know how to solve problem, I will consult information in the Internet which costs me just a moment to find it. Furthermore, it also contains a lot of advanced knowledge so that I can broaden my mind easily without going out. Secondly, this device have a myriad of tools for me to refine my presentation or make it colorful. With various kind of graphic illustration and modern style, I can edit my Powerpoint ưwhatever I want. As a result, I got a good result for the good Powerpoint and useful information in my presentation. Finally, computer is the best stuff for relaxation and entertainment. I can play games, chat with my friends and chilling with music. All the kind of recreation helps me feel better after full-day working. My computer is the another part of my world and I will not sell it at any costs in the future.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of things to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 each one of us interested in. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing for me is my computer I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 when I was 15. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this computer in Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".many kinds
many kind
 of activity. Firstly
, it's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient to study. If I do not know how to solve problem, I will consult information The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the Internet".on the Internet
in the Internet
 which costs me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a moment to find it. Furthermore
, it also
 contains This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 advanced knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can broaden my mind easily
 without going out. Secondly
, The verb 'have' is plural. Did you mean: "this device has"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this device has
this device have
 a myriad of tools for me to refine my presentation or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it colorful. With various kind of graphic illustration and modern style, I can edit my Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
Powerpoint
Possible spelling mistake found.whatever
ưwhatever
 I want. As a result
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 result for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
Powerpoint
 and useful information in my presentation. Finally
, computer is the best stuff for relaxation and entertainment. I can play games, chat with my friends and chilling with music. All the kind of recreation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me feel better after full-day working. My computer is the another part of my world and I will not sell it at any costs in the future. 