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some people believe that e books these days are frequently read more than paper books do the advantages of reading e books outweigh its drawbacks

some people believe that e books these days are frequently read more than paper books do the advantages of reading e books outweigh its drawbacks Jo2pB
Nowadays e-books have become a main benefit given by the edge cutting technology. Nevertheless it is witnessed by a plethora of people that e-books are read more frequently than the paper backs. In my opinion, advantages of reading e-books greatly outweigh drawbacks because e-books are easily portable and do not harm our percious environment.  Despite the minimal disadvantages there are in my ideology some major plus points of reading e-books. One elephant sized benefit of studying by these books is that they are portable. Since e-books can be stored in electronic devices, they can be carried very easily. For instance, students can revise their syllabus on the go. Moreover these books can also help in inculcating habbit of reading and one can become aware as well as educated. Another positive aspect is that electronic books are inexpensive. To be more specific no papers are required, as a result, minimal deforestation takes place. To add more shelter of birds and animals is now safe. So these e-books are eco-friendly. Admittedly there are some minor drawbacks of reading e-books. Firstly, human health is being affected adversely. Frequent reading of e-books is having direct repercussions on eyes as blue light is emitted by phone screen which affects human eyes. However this in my opinion is not a very big negative impact because tecnology has given us new feature in electronic devices which is ' reading mode' by enabling this light coming from mobile screen become adjustable which do not harm eyes. Secondly, reader can be distracted while reading such books due to some irrelevent advertisements and notification messages from social sites and other applications. In conclusion, our growing modren techology has blessed us with many useful factors and we should take advantage of these to the fullest. E-books are playing an essential role in life of students as well as other readers. Lastly we should encourage its use to make our life easy and smooth.
Nowadays e-books have become a main benefit
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given
by the edge cutting technology.
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Nevertheless
it
is witnessed
by a plethora of
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people
that e-books
are read
more
frequently
than the paper backs. In my opinion, advantages of
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reading
e-books
greatly
outweigh drawbacks
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because
e-books are
easily
portable and do not harm our
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percious
environment.  Despite the minimal disadvantages there are in my ideology
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some
major plus points of
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reading
e-books. One elephant sized benefit of studying by these
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books
is that they are portable. Since e-books can
be stored
in electronic devices, they can
be carried
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very
easily
.
For instance
, students can revise their syllabus on the go.
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Moreover
these
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books
can
also
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help
in inculcating
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habbit
of
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reading
and one can become aware
as well
as educated. Another
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positive
aspect is that electronic
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books
are inexpensive. To be more specific no papers
are required
,
as a result
, minimal deforestation takes place. To
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add
more shelter of birds and animals is
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now
safe.
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So
these e-books are eco-friendly.

Admittedly
there are
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some
minor drawbacks of
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reading
e-books.
Firstly
, human health is being
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affected
adversely
. Frequent
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reading
of e-books is having direct repercussions on eyes as blue light
is emitted
by phone screen which affects human eyes.
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However
this in my opinion is not a
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very
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big
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negative
impact
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because
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tecnology
has
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given
us new feature in electronic devices which is
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'
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reading
mode' by enabling this light coming from mobile screen become adjustable which do not harm eyes.
Secondly
, reader can
be distracted
while
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reading
such
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books
due to
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some
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irrelevent
advertisements and notification messages from social sites and other applications.

In conclusion
, our growing
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modren
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techology
has blessed us with
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many
useful
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factors and
we should take advantage of these to the fullest. E-books are playing an essential role in life of students
as well
as other readers.
Lastly
we should encourage its
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use to
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make
our life easy and smooth.
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IELTS essay some people believe that e books these days are frequently read more than paper books do the advantages of reading e books outweigh its drawbacks

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