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Some people believe that doing sport school is a distraction from more important work

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Most people agree that there are some more important subject than PE in the school carriculum I partly agree with this statement and the cause will be given in this essay I strongly believe that the lessons are between some other subject which are more important and difficult to learn is there are some students who are good at PE I would strongly recommend that for that kind of students school teachers should organize Sports Club in that case they may achieve high milestone Secondly the students who aren't good at the PE must learn another difficult subject instead of PE Consequently they may learn more subjects which are difficult to learn School teachers must change the timing of subjects as a result students acquire the best results To conclude all of the things are depends on the timing of the school subjects
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IELTS essay Some people believe that doing sport school is a distraction from more important work

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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