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Describe a friends of yours

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I'm talking about you, one of my best friends. I met her in 8th grade and we have been friends for 8 years now. Currently, the two of us each attend universities in two different places. In terms of appearance, she is someone who looks very pretty. She has long black hair and black eyes. She has a slim figure. She is a very simple person who never dresses up. She is gentle, kind and always cares about everyone around her. We have the same hobbies of reading and walking in our free time, but we both don't like noisy places. That's why she is always a place for me to confide everything in life. Although we are now in the same place, thanks to the Internet, we are still in regular contact with each other. She is a great friend.

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 we have been friends for 8 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Currently
, the two of us each attend universities in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
. In terms of appearance, she is someone who looks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 pretty. She has long black hair and black eyes. She has a slim figure. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 simple person who never dresses up. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 is gentle, kind and always cares about everyone around her. We have the same hobbies of reading and walking in our free time, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we both don't like noisy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
. That's why she is always a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 for me to confide everything in life. Although we are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
, thanks to the Internet, we are still
 in regular contact with each other. She is a great friend. 