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In today's era, public transport plays a vital role in daily lives. The people of different age groups use the public transports for their use, which can be going to schools, work stations, malls, etc. The transport facilities they use are of three types, railways, buses, and taxis. Research said that the age group of under 30 prefer taxis over the rails and buses for their use. The age between 30 to 50 also utilize taxis over the other two means of transport as they think taxis are much safer and reliable. Senior citizens of the age group 50 to 65 are now preferring to go in taxis as they need comfortable seats to travel. If we move further, to more senior ages of people, we will see that they even don't utilize the taxis much and even they use these means of transport they use it only once or twice in a week.
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IELTS essay money spent per week on transportation

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  American English
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154 words
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