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Some people believe that doing in team is better than individual do you agree or disagree with this

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In this contemporary era of globalisation world with your idea of individual considered that it is more efficient to do something in a team instead of doing alone I like a product can be beneficial in order to reduce work pressure as well as learn corporate values to commence with how working in a group is more advantix the first and foremost is learning managing about the work which would directly decrease your workload to elaborate it the division of work is only possible in a group and people can learn many things while performing a team work such as time management even their work will be done within short duration of time likewise they they get knowledge about the proper utilisation of human resources and some more professional in their work by doing particular task together which help them to collaborate ideas and do something innovative for instance a survey was conducted by the Oxford University revealed that 96. 8 percent individual save their time and work in a better way merely because of possible by teamwork hands it would be provide fruitful result for all the members for the more The Other married is that Corporation about could occur only due to working with other people to explain it during doing any work with more than two people teach them importance of not only coordination but also provide more opportunities like reason behind the success is cooperative nature in every field in fact organisation before giving jobs at the ability of of candidates about group spirit which can affect either the performance or position of an individual for instance a headline of newspaper revealed that 7 out of 10 work had been successfully done in a team only therefore it teacher to workers about responsibility towards their work of learning the value of Corporation in conclusion it is better to learn something in a group rather than doing individually I largely with agree with this notion as it not only help them manage their work but also understand they can easily understand their ability about the Corporation
In this contemporary era of
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globalisation
world with your
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idea
of individual considered that it is more efficient to do something in a team
instead
of
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doing
alone I like a product can be beneficial in order to
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reduce
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work
pressure
as well
as learn corporate values to commence with how working in a
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group
is more
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advantix
the
first
and foremost is learning managing about the
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work
which would
directly
decrease your workload to elaborate it the division of
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work
is
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only
possible in a
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group
and
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people
can learn
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many
things while performing a team
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work
such as time management even their
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work
will
be done
within short duration of time
likewise
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they they
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get
knowledge about the proper
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utilisation
of human resources and
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some
more professional in their
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work
by
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doing
particular task together which
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help
them to collaborate
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ideas
and do something innovative
for instance
a survey
was conducted
by the Oxford University revealed that 96. 8 percent individual save their time and
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work
in a better way
merely
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because
of possible by teamwork hands it would be
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provide
fruitful result for all the members for the more The Other married is that Corporation about could occur
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only
due to working with other
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people
to
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explain
it during
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doing
any
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work
with more than two
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people
teach them importance of not
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only
coordination
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but
also
provide more opportunities like reason behind the success is cooperative nature in every field in fact
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organisation
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before
giving jobs at the ability
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of of
candidates about
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group
spirit which can affect either the performance or position of an individual
for instance
a headline of newspaper revealed that 7 out of 10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
had been
successfully
done in a team
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only
therefore
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it teacher
to workers about responsibility towards their
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work
of learning the value of Corporation
in conclusion
it is better to learn something in a
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group
rather
than
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doing
individually
I
largely
with
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agree
with this notion as it not
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only
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help
them manage their
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work
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but
also
understand they can
easily
understand their ability about the Corporation
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IELTS essay Some people believe that doing in team is better than individual with this

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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