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Education in the future.Write your answer in about 100 words.

Education in the future. Write your answer in about 100 words. PLGX2
We are living in industrialize life, which creates more and more changes. Hence the government is conscientious about educating children. Today, the parents'pressure is not only the score or curriculum in school but they also spend children time in soft skills such as communication, relevanted social activity, . . . . . Moreover, due to innovative metropolitan century, a lot of digital tools invented will play the crucial role in teaching and studying. For instance, the subject will be based on their field. Overall, from my perspective looking, these ingenious ways bring many advantages, therefore it is effective in finding potential of children, finally the lifestyle wil be enhanced.
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IELTS essay Education in the future. Write your answer in about 100 words.

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