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Some people believe that cooking food at home is a complete waste of time. According to them, restaurants are better and make modern living easier and a whole lot less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that cooking food at home is a complete waste of time. According to them, restaurants are better and make modern living easier and a whole lot less stressful. JlAx6
Restaurants are a great solution for busy professionals who do not have enough time to cook a proper meal. It is true that restaurant food makes modern life easier. Concern of its convenience, it still cannot be considered better than homemade food because of health aspects. People who eat at restaurants regularly develop many health problems. Consequently, a nice homemade meal will give people a quality life and balance heath. First of all, restaurants might claim that they take all measures to ensure that their food is cooked and served in a hygienic environment. However, some kitchens are still not enough clean for a qualified cook space. For example, in the recent past, food authorities shut down many restaurants in Kerala, India because they did not score well in the cleanliness department. That is the main factor that gives people health issues. In contrast, meals that were made by ourselves at home ensure the quality of food and cleanliness. Secondly, many menus at the restaurant seem to not serve people’s demands. For example, some people likely to eat a large number of proteins or vegetable fats. However, restaurants do not serve more than their original, consequently, customers have to buy more meals. Nevertheless, they might not consume all the ration the restaurant gives. It is a big waste of food while many homeless and children have nothing eatable. On the contrary, we can control the amount of food we cook and serve ourselves at our demand. Thirdly, using at the restaurant every day costs so much that the meal bills will take up a lot in people’s income. The more quality and healthy food they buy, the more money they have to spend on it. Moreover, relying on the restaurant make our cooking skill worse. In the current period of life, people would have to do cooking by themselves to survive. It will be very a hard time for people relied on restaurants that are struggling to cook a dish. For this reason, cooking every day is definitely a course of major skill in our life to survive. In conclusion, cooking food at home is not a waste of time. In fact, it is absolutely essential for good health. Restaurants are good for eating out once in a while but they can’t replace traditional home cooking. Home-made food is unlikely to contain preservatives and harmful chemicals. What’s more, food cooked at home is cheaper. A restaurant meal usually costs much more than a typical meal cooked at home and does not serves our demands as ourselves.
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Restaurants
are a great solution for busy professionals who do not have
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enough
time to cook a proper
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meal
. It is true that
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restaurant
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food
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makes
modern
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life
easier. Concern of its convenience, it
still
cannot
be considered
better than homemade
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food
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because
of
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health
aspects.
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People
who eat at
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restaurants
regularly
develop
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many
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health
problems.
Consequently
, a nice homemade
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meal
will give
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people
a quality
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life
and balance heath.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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restaurants
might claim that they take all measures to ensure that their
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food
is cooked
and served in a hygienic environment.
However
,
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some
kitchens are
still
not
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enough
clean for a qualified cook space.
For example
, in the recent past,
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food
authorities shut down
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many
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restaurants
in Kerala, India
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because
they did not score well in the cleanliness department.
That is
the main factor that gives
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people
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health
issues.
In contrast
,
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meals
that
were made
by ourselves at home ensure the quality of
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food
and cleanliness.

Secondly
,
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many
menus at the
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restaurant
seem to not
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serve
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people’s
demands.
For example
,
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some
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people
likely to eat
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a large number of
proteins or vegetable fats.
However
,
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restaurants
do not
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serve
more than their original,
consequently
, customers
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have to
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buy
more
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meals
.
Nevertheless
, they might not consume all the ration the
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restaurant
gives. It is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
waste of
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food
while
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many
homeless and children have nothing eatable.
On the contrary
, we can control the amount of
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food
we cook and
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serve
ourselves at our demand.

Thirdly
, using at the
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restaurant
every day costs
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so
much that the
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meal
bills will take up a lot in
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people’s
income. The more quality and healthy
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food
they
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buy
, the more money they
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have to
spend on it.
Moreover
, relying on the
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restaurant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our cooking
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skill
worse. In the
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current
period of
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life
,
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people
would
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have to
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go cooking".
do cooking
by themselves to survive. It will be
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very
a
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hard
time for
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people
relied on
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restaurants
that are struggling to cook a dish.
For this reason
, cooking every day is definitely a course of major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
in our
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life
to survive.

In conclusion
, cooking
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food
at home is not a waste of time. In fact, it is
absolutely
essential for
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good
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health
.
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Restaurants
are
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good
for eating out once in a while
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but
they can’t replace traditional home cooking. Home-made
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food
is unlikely to contain preservatives and harmful chemicals. What’s more,
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food
cooked at home is cheaper. A
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restaurant
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meal
usually
costs much more than a typical
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meal
cooked at home and does not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "serve"?
serves
our demands as ourselves.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that cooking food at home is a complete waste of time. According to them, restaurants are better and make modern living easier and a whole lot less stressful.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
426 words
6.0
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