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“Prevention is better than cure”, people seems to be forgetting these kind of proverbs and nearly trying to summon their own destruction in the mode of wars. How do you view this

“Prevention is better than cure”, people seems to be forgetting these kind of proverbs and nearly trying to summon their own destruction in the mode of wars. How do you view this oEAag
Now people are using lot of language, every person is using their own language in native place. our ancestors gave many proverbs in every language. Whatever they have given is for people to live their lives with the right ethics. Ancient periods some people are doing wrong things, so they follow these kind of proverbs. It is used in their own life and truly it work people obstacles in doing wrong things. Nowadays, every person creates a problem and then they find a solution to it. Because, people definitely need to think about preventing trouble rather than thinking that it should solve problems. That is something everyone knows right now, corona issues have trouble solving the disease. The only reason for this is that people do not follow the proper precautionary measures. Thus we suffered many casualties, let us now know what is special about proverbs. It is because of problems like this that our ancestors lived by the proverbs. But we forget it and travel ourselves towards destruction. Now in the name of development we are growing rapidly in science. Thus we are artificially experiencing happiness. We lose the happiness that is naturally, without following these proverbs. In the present situation these proverbs should be told to the children often. Only then will they follow the ethics of these proverbs and set up their lives well. Finally, I want to say one thing proverb is a powerful knowledge that restores us whenever we are in distress.
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people
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lot of
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own
language in native

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place
.
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our
ancestors gave
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many
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proverbs
in every language. Whatever they have
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given
is for
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people


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to
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live
their
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lives
with the right ethics.

Ancient periods
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some
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people
are doing
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wrong
things,
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so
they follow
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these kind
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proverbs
. It

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is
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used
in their
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own
life and
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it
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work
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people
obstacles in doing
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wrong
things. Nowadays, every

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person
creates a
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problem and
then they find a solution to it.
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,
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people
definitely need to

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think
about preventing trouble
rather
than thinking that it should solve problems.
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something


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everyone
knows right
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now
, corona issues have trouble solving the disease. The
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only
reason for this
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is


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that
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people
do not follow the proper precautionary measures.
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we suffered
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many
casualties,
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let


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us
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now
know what is special about proverbs.

It is
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because
of problems like this that our ancestors
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lived
by the
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.
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we forget
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it


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and
travel ourselves towards destruction.
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in the name of development we are growing
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rapidly


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in
science.
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Thus
we are
artificially
experiencing happiness. We lose the happiness
that is
naturally
,

without following these
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proverbs
. In the present situation these
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proverbs
should be
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told
to
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the


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children
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often
.
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Only
then will they follow the ethics of these
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proverbs
and set up their
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lives
well.

Finally
, I want to say one thing
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proverb
is
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a powerful knowledge
that restores us

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whenever
we are in distress.
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IELTS essay “Prevention is better than cure”, people seems to be forgetting these kind of proverbs and nearly trying to summon their own destruction in the mode of wars. How do you view this

Essay
  American English
17 paragraphs
247 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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