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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods. QGyL
The advent of the industrial revolution and marvels of technology has entirely modified our ways of living in terms of communication, education, transport, warfare and agriculture. Thousands of manufacturing industries have made prodigious amount of products available to a large population. These products are avaiable in different prices, varieties and qualities. Some people opine that products should be made to last longer. Whereas others object that products should be cheap so everyone especially with meagre income can benefit from it. In my opinion, economical and safe product that lasts a considerable amount of time deemed a quality product that is both people and environmental friendly. To begin with, though the products that are made up of low quality materials are cheap but they may break within few days and ends in bins. These cheap single uses throw-away materials are hard to decompose and pollutes the water sources which endangers species and human survival on the planet. Moreover, economical products are not valued and used properly, eventually end in waste and replaced by another cheap product. This vicious cycle continues which does not save money rather its a financial and environmental burden. Hence, i suggest that focus of manufacturing should be on sustainability and overall safety. When the demand goes up and sales are in large volumes, prices come down, therefore quality is more substantial. On the contrary, some people contend that the product's price should be economical so that a wide community can improve their lifestyle through the utilization of products like everyday kitchen utensils including blender and dishwasher. These appliances are essential to making housechores easy and saves a lot of time. The technology is expensive when its new in the market and is not accessible to everyone. In this case, research in to innovative procedures is required to make the product cheaper for customers with considerable quality. For instance, solar energy derived electricity is made cheaper and therefore affordable for everyone. To conclude, business, investors and research institutes should aim to develop products that are planet friendly, sustainable and affordable for eveyone
The advent of the industrial revolution and marvels of technology has
entirely
modified our ways of living in terms of communication, education, transport, warfare and agriculture. Thousands of manufacturing industries have made prodigious amount of
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products
available to a large population. These
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products
are
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avaiable
in
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different
prices, varieties and
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qualities
.
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people
opine that
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products
should
be made
to last longer. Whereas others object that
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products
should be
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cheap
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so
everyone
especially
with
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meagre
income can benefit from it. In my opinion, economical and safe
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product
that lasts a considerable amount of time deemed a
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quality
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product
that is
both
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people
and environmental friendly.

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begin
with, though the
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products
that
are made
up of low
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quality
materials are
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cheap
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but
they may break within few days and ends in bins. These
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cheap
single
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uses
throw-away materials are
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hard
to decompose and pollutes the water sources which endangers species and human survival on the planet.
Moreover
, economical
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products
are not valued and
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used
properly
,
eventually
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end
in waste and replaced by another
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cheap
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product
. This vicious cycle continues which does not save money
rather
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a financial and environmental burden.
Hence
,
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i
suggest that focus of manufacturing should be on sustainability and
overall
safety. When the demand goes up and sales are in large volumes, prices
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come
down,
therefore
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quality
is more substantial.

On the contrary
,
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some
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people
contend that the product's price should be economical
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so
that a wide community can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their lifestyle through the utilization of
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products
like everyday kitchen utensils including blender and dishwasher. These appliances are essential to making
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housechores
easy and saves
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a lot of
time. The technology is expensive when its new in the market and is not accessible to everyone.
In this case
, research in to innovative procedures
is required
to
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make
the
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product
cheaper for customers with considerable
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quality
.
For instance
, solar energy derived electricity
is made
cheaper and
therefore
affordable for everyone.

To conclude
, business, investors and research institutes should aim to develop
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products
that are planet friendly, sustainable and affordable for
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eveyone
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IELTS essay Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods.

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