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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? It is an undeniable fact that the household works which are used to be done by manually are now being done by electronic gadgets. But here a question arises, whether this trend brings more merits or not as compared to the demerits. No issue, this essay will explain how have gadgets changed the life of people in a positive way. To begin with, there are multifarious pros of doing work with machines. First of all, in the past days, public used to do their domestic works by their hands and they had only two options, either they will do their house work or do their study to make their career. Because they did not get enough time to do school work after doing at home. But, in this modern era, folks can save their time by using technological gadgets such as, microwave, fridge, mixer and so on. As a result, they easily get extra time to do another

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? It is an undeniable fact that the household works which are used to be done by manually are now being done by electronic gadgets. But here a question arises, whether this trend brings more merits or not as compared to the demerits. No issue, this essay will explain how have gadgets changed the life of people in a positive way. To begin with, there are multifarious pros of doing work with machines. First of all, in the past days, public used to do their domestic works by their hands and they had only two options, either they will do their house work or do their study to make their career. Because they did not get enough time to do school work after doing at home. But, in this modern era, folks can save their time by using technological gadgets such as, microwave, fridge, mixer and so on. As a result, they easily get extra time to do another work, like their academic studies. Probing further to the another benefit of changing the way of doing work. The life of people has been become more easier and stress free by the use of advanced technology. Due to technological devices, folks have to do less physical work and can do rest. For example, my aunt was suffering from knee pain because she had to do lot of tasks by her hands, but recently, her son bought a vacuum cleaner, mixer for her and because of those, she does not have to do much job. Consequently, she is well now instead of her past days. To conclude, doing household works by using electronic gadgets have many merits such as, these consume time and give extra time for doing other jobs.

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