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Some people believe that communication skill is important in convincing people while others have a different point of view. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that communication skill is important in convincing people while others have a different point of view. e58Ep
It is believed that communication skills are important where we need to convince people at large. I completely agree with the given statement. I believe that without these, leadership skills do not cultivate. Firstly, communication helps in establishing the connection. Broadly, there are two types of conversation, verbal and non-verbal. Many individuals possess the ability to influence other people by uttering the words on the correct time to make the conversation interesting. For example, many marketing people successfully sell their products to the individuals who even do not require them because buyers curious about the commodities are presented to them. However, It is sometimes very difficult to convince people about something new. But, they possess the talent of transmitting the information by influencing the buyers. Secondly, information sent by the communicator should be logical. Finally, the individuals get convinced when they are able to understand the speaker properly. On the other hand, people think they can convince others with different strategies. For instance, many companies believe that they can sell their products by just advertising. However, the advertising also requires to include a message which can convince people to buy the product. Moreover, People who communicate effectively can become good leaders. They can motivate their followers at large by word of mouth. There are many people around the globe who run their nation and are the idols of their communities. To conclude, I would say that convincing requires effective communication skills and it is not necessary to possess these skills by birth, a person can learn these skills.
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is believed
that communication
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are
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important
where we need to
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convince
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people
at large. I completely
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agree
with the
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given
statement. I believe that without these, leadership
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skills
do not cultivate.

Firstly
, communication
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helps
in establishing the connection.
Broadly
, there are two types of conversation, verbal and non-verbal.
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Many
individuals possess the ability to influence other
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people
by uttering the words on the correct time to
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make
the conversation interesting.
For example
,
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many
marketing
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people
successfully
sell their products to the individuals who even do not require them
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because
buyers curious about the commodities
are presented
to them.
However
, It is
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sometimes
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very
difficult to
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convince
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people
about something new.
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But
, they possess the talent of transmitting the information by influencing the buyers.
Secondly
, information
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sent
by the communicator should be logical.
Finally
, the individuals
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get
convinced when they are able to understand the speaker
properly
.

On the other hand
,
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people
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think
they can
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convince
others with
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different
strategies.
For instance
,
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many
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companies
believe that they can sell their products by
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just
advertising.
However
, the advertising
also
requires to include a message which can
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convince
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people
to
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buy
the product.
Moreover
,
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People
who communicate
effectively
can become
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good
leaders. They can motivate their followers at large by word of mouth. There are
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many
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people
around the globe who run their nation and are the idols of their communities.

To conclude
, I would say that convincing requires effective communication
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skills
and it is not necessary to possess these
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skills
by birth, a person can learn these
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skills
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that communication skill is important in convincing people while others have a different point of view.

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4 paragraphs
258 words
8.5
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