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Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day.

Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day. 3WJqb

It is sometimes believed that home assignments should not be given to students after school day regularly. This essay completely agrees with this idea for several reasons. The first argument given to support my opinion is that children who are doing study may have obligations to complete the homework while having to deal with an excessive load of knowledge at their school will constant examinations. This causes them to sacrifice their sleep to meet academic demands. Consequently, it is harmful to them that exhausts children and their interest in studying, thereby making them suffer from depression. By way of illustration, a child who works to a deadline of Math exercises every day at home keeps moving on those exercises all night to complete them. This prevents him from not having enough sleep or waking up early every morning. Another point behind my belief is that students will return home with excessive amounts of homework after giving them exercises. With a big assignment, they may properly reduce their after-school time for other extracurricular and leisure activities. Therefore, this can make the children not be unable to develop necessary soft -skills. For instance, when children are on the way back home after the end of classes, instead of hanging out with friends or coming up with their relatives’ houses, they have to go home straight and then complete the exercises as soon as possible. In conclusion, I entirely agree that giving daily homework should not be applied to students given the aforementioned arguments.

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sometimes
 believed that home assignments should not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to students after school day regularly
. This essay completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
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idea
 for several reasons.

The first
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given
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children
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meet
 academic demands. Consequently
, it is harmful to them that exhausts You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 and their interest in studying, thereby making them suffer from depression. By way of illustration, a child who works to a deadline of Math You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercises
 every day at home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
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exercises
 all night to complete them. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precludes
prevents
 him from not having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 sleep or waking up early every morning.

Another point behind my belief is that students will return home with excessive amounts of homework after giving them You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercises
. With a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 assignment, they may properly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 their after-school time for other extracurricular and leisure activities. Therefore
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make
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children
 not be unable to develop necessary soft -This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. For instance
, when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 are on the way back home after the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of classes, instead
 of hanging out with friends or coming up with their relatives’ This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go home straight and then complete the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercises
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soon
 as possible.

In conclusion
, I entirely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that giving daily homework should not be applied
 to students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the aforementioned arguments. 