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What should you do to reduce stress and pressure during the time you have to study online?

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People often claim that learning online can bring about stress and pressure among students. Why do they think so and how to overcome this depressed circumstance? For this essay I try to show the general reasons and how I can cope with stress. To start with, e-learning can exert detrimental effects to students although it is considered to be optimal solution during the covid-19 pandemic. What I want to mention here is that studying online is less efficiently than studying at school. It is due to the fact that there is a great number of students revented from acquiring knowledge. For instance, the limited time of each lesson is shorter so that teachers are not able to instruct the main information. Consequently, learners can not memorise any data and lose their way. As a result of this, they become negative and start thinking they are not good enough eventhough they try their best. In addittion, learning from pieces of technology does not meet the need of communication helping people improve their personality and metality. I mean, students can keep in touch with their friends by email or video call but it is evident that they may not share with others as effectively as they are face to face at school. Overtime, they are not in the mood to talk to anyone and tend to isolate themselve which has resulted in depression. What is more, the lack of interactivity among people has bad impact on improvement of mindset. Therefore, the development of thinking skills will not be stimulated which leads to the lag of mankind society. For example, students without the thought are not able to generalise the problem, the knowledge at school to understand the essence and memorize it, so they do not apply what they have learned in practice. Furthermore, learning online has led to a generation of dependent of the young. The reason for this is that they have to sit in front of the screen of technological devices for hours that prevents them from an active life with outdoor exercising and it can result in eye strain which leads to optical weakness. Those are typical matters to claim negative side of learning online contains harmful impacts. The most obvious answer I think is that I should open my heart to engage my parents in conversation when I encounter many difficulties. There is a beyond belief that communication can be a amazing way to zap stress fast. Clearly, my parents will understand and empathize with my condition. They can also offer advice about how to have a reasonable schedule which may help me to overcome and de-stress when I am in hard academic work. By that way, I consider my parrents as my friends who I can carry on conversation for a long time during social distance because of corona virus so I never feel lonly. Then, I use the outgrowth of internet to consolidate knowledge and practice day in day out. What I am trying to say is that there are several of the free educational videos on social media like youtube providing me much aspect of the sudjects I am not good at before and do homework which is relvelant to the lesson as much as possible. On top of that, thank to the variety of thinking skills, there are many ways to forged this. By way of example, for crictical thinking skill, I will cultivate more knowledge, supplement the information about different fiel like the society, my major and also others since I have a board understanding, I can broach the subject and win an argument. After, I may make time for physical actvities. According to expert, although working out exerts pressure on our bodies, after that hard stage, metabolism process is regulated and diminish the amount of cortisol causing negative responses as depression. Taking everything into consideration, with the stressors in the majority of students and the solution stated above, I hope parents can campassion to their daughter or son and students can choose one of my personal way to relive stress and make school life more relaxing
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can bring about
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and pressure among
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students
. Why do they
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and how to overcome this depressed circumstance? For this essay I try to
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the general reasons and how I can cope with
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stress
.

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with, e-learning can exert detrimental effects to
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students
although it
is considered
to be optimal solution during the
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covid-19
pandemic. What I want to mention here is that studying
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online
is less
efficiently
than studying at
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school
. It is due to the fact that there is a great number of
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students
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revented
from acquiring
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knowledge
.
For instance
, the limited time of each lesson is shorter
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so
that teachers are not able to instruct the main information.
Consequently
, learners can not
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memorise
any data and lose their way.
As a result
of this, they become
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negative
and
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,
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from pieces of technology does not
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meet
the need of communication helping
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people
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improve
their personality and
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metality
. I mean,
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students
can
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keep
in touch with their friends by email or video call
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but
it is evident that they may not share with others as
effectively
as they are face to face at
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school
. Overtime, they are not in the mood to talk to anyone and tend to isolate
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themselve
which has resulted in depression.
What is more
, the lack of interactivity among
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people
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has
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bad
impact on improvement of mindset.
Therefore
, the development of
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thinking
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skills
will not
be stimulated
which leads to the lag of mankind society.
For example
,
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students
without the
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thought
are not able to
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generalise
the problem, the
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knowledge
at
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school
to understand the essence and
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memorize
it,
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so
they do not apply what they have learned in practice.
Furthermore
,
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learning
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online
has led to a generation of dependent of the young.
The reason for this is
that they
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have to
sit in front of the screen of technological devices for hours that
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prevents
them from an active life with outdoor exercising and it can result in eye strain which leads to optical weakness. Those are typical matters to claim
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negative
side of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
contains harmful impacts.

The most obvious answer I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
is that I should open my heart to engage my parents in conversation when I encounter
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many
difficulties. There is a beyond belief that communication can be
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a
amazing way to zap
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stress
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fast
.
Clearly
, my parents will understand and empathize with my condition. They can
also
offer advice about how to have a reasonable schedule which may
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help
me to overcome and de-
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stress
when I am in
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hard
academic work. By that way, I consider my
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parrents
as my friends who I can carry on conversation for a long time during social distance
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because
of
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corona virus
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so
I never feel
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. Then, I
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use
the outgrowth of internet to consolidate
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knowledge
and practice day in day out. What I am trying to say is that there are several of the free educational videos on social media like
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youtube
providing me much aspect of the
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sudjects
I am not
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good
at
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before
and do homework which is
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relvelant
to the lesson as much as possible.
On top of that
, thank to the variety of
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thinking
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skills
, there are
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many
ways
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crictical
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thinking
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skill
, I will cultivate more
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knowledge
, supplement the information about
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different
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fiel
like the society, my major and
also
others since I have a board understanding, I can broach the subject and win an argument. After, I may
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make
time for physical
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actvities
. According to expert, although working out exerts pressure on our bodies, after that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
stage, metabolism process
is regulated
and diminish the amount of cortisol causing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
responses as depression.

Taking everything into consideration, with the stressors in the majority of
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students
and the solution stated above, I hope parents can
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campassion
to their daughter or son and
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students
can choose one of my personal way to relive
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stress
and
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make
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school
life more relaxing
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IELTS essay What should you do to reduce stress and pressure during the time you have to study online?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
683 words
6.0
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