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some people believe that any people can create art such as painting,poetry,music and so on.why?

some people believe that any people can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. why? GrAEx
There are several reasons that make people innovative artist. To commence with, it is interesting in people. Majority of people are curious towards art so that they can easily learn art as well they become master in painting, poetry, music and many more. To add to it, art generate great future. People can become good artist in any art. As a result, they cam earn large amount of money. For instance, nowadays many singers become popular and wealthy by singing.
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IELTS essay some people believe that any people can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. why?

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80 words
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