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Some people believe that animals for food is cruel but other claim that animals are necessary part of diet . Why do you think

Some people believe that animals for food is cruel but other claim that animals are necessary part of diet. Why do you think JqGqa

A few people argues that hunting animals for eating purposes is not good, while others think that meat is important part of our body diet. According to my opinion, it is normal act to kill animals for food in some areas which do not have agricultural lands and to maintain ecological cycle. Firstly, animal meat is common diet in some regions, in which soil is not able to grow vegetables, fruits and crops. For instance, due to growing population of humans. there are lot of buildings and houses constructed in farming areas. Which reduced the size of farms. As a result, production of crops decreased. for example, peoples in UK normally eat beef and chicken because vegetarian food is expensive

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people
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argues
 that hunting animals for eating purposes is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, while others This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that meat is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 part of our body diet. According to my opinion, it is normal act to kill animals for food in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas which do not have agricultural lands and to maintain ecological cycle.

Firstly
, animal meat is common diet in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 regions, in which soil is not able to grow vegetables, fruits and crops. For instance
, due to growing population of humans. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 buildings and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 constructed in farming areas. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the size of farms. As a result
, production of crops decreased. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 example, peoples in UK normally
 eat beef and chicken This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 vegetarian food is Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphexpensive.expensive!expensive?expensive:expensive,expensive;
expensive