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Some people believe that all university students should have the freedom to study subjects of their interests. Others claim they should limit their choices to specific subjects that can be useful in the future, such as those in the areas of science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that all university students should have the freedom to study subjects of their interests. Others claim they should limit their choices to specific subjects that can be useful in the future, such as those in the areas of science and technology. 2rodX
The freedom to major in a subject according to one’s own interest at university has sparked much debate. While some people seem to applaud such personal liberty, others denounce this position and instead recommend that university students opt for more ‘practical’ areas of studies, such as science and technology. What good, the opponents frequently challenge, is a subject without practical applications? They point to some arcane subjects, for example, linguistic, ancient history, and philosophy, of which use is very much questioned. These subjects may seem impractical when students complete their education and might struggle for employment. However, the freedom to choose the subject instead of being dictated upon empowers the students in their educational pursuit. When they feel they make their own choice, university students can attend classes more, complete more tasks and assignments, and take their studies more seriously. All these advantages benefit the students and the universities more because there are fewer dropout rates, more conducive teaching-learning environment, and higher GPAs. While existing employment may not offer anything for the students with very specialized majors, the graduates can blaze a new path. For example, with the advent of science and technology, there have been new majors previously unseen before, such as Epigenetics, Disruptive Science, and Behavioral Economics. These budding areas of studies have ushered millions of dollars into research and development as well as the related history, creating a myriad of jobs unparalleled in modern history. In summary, although the practicality of subjects to be taken by university students is a concerning issue, the interest in the chosen majors is more of paramount importance.
The freedom to
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major
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subject
according to one’s
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own
interest at
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university
has sparked much debate. While
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some
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seem to applaud such personal liberty, others denounce this position and
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university
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students
opt for more ‘practical’ areas of studies, such as science and technology.

What
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good
, the opponents
frequently
challenge, is a
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subject
without practical applications? They point to
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some
arcane
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subjects
,
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, linguistic, ancient history, and philosophy, of which
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use
is
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very
much questioned. These
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subjects
may seem impractical when
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students
complete their education and might struggle for employment.

However
, the freedom to choose the
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subject
instead
of
being dictated
upon empowers the
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students
in their educational pursuit. When they feel they
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make
their
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own
choice,
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university
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students
can attend classes more, complete more tasks and assignments, and take their studies more
seriously
. All these advantages benefit the
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students
and the
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universities
more
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because
there are fewer dropout rates, more conducive teaching-learning environment, and higher
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GPAs
.

While existing employment may not offer anything for the
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students
with
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very
specialized
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majors
, the graduates can blaze a new path.
For example
, with the advent of science and technology, there have been new
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majors
previously unseen
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before
, such as Epigenetics, Disruptive Science, and Behavioral Economics. These budding areas of studies have ushered millions of dollars into research and development
as well
as the related history, creating a myriad of jobs unparalleled in modern history.

In summary, although the practicality of
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subjects
to
be taken
by
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university
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students
is a concerning issue, the interest in the chosen
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majors
is more of paramount importance.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that all university students should have the freedom to study subjects of their interests. Others claim they should limit their choices to specific subjects that can be useful in the future, such as those in the areas of science and technology.

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