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Some people believe that a year gape before university education leads children's nowhere.

Some people believe that a year gape before university education leads children's nowhere. aJPjw

Todays world is similar weightage giving to the experience and other activities besides educational qualifications. Some people believe that a year gape before university education leads children's nowhere. I opine that a year gape is beneficial for students in myriad ways. This essay will scrutinize the following aspects of the quandary in the ensuing paragraph. To begin with, encouraging future university students to take a year gape before starting bachelors which leads students too work and do not come back for higher education. Moreover brake between studies divert the minds of young and they will likely to be drop out before completing course in university. For example, in the survey of 2020 people who take a year for travel or work experience are more likely leave their studies unfinished. Secondly, I believe that governments should encourage denizens to take a year to travel and work before enrolling for after school in order to gain experience and understands the fields he or she want to study in, it gives a clear understanding for their future goals. Additionally, those students who take a year to travel or work are more focused after returns back for education because their confidence proliferated, they do study in well manner and focused. For instance, in the survey of 2015 elucidates those who travel or gain work experience before university are likely perform better than those who don't. In conclusion, taking this points into considerations without a shadow of doubt, from a personal perspective, I am incline to believe that there are more merits to take a brake compare to demerits.

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In conclusion
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