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Covid-19 has had a massive impact on everyone around the world. Our lives were turned upside down. What changes did you make to your lifestyle to help you adapt to the current situation?

Covid-19 has had a massive impact on everyone around the world. Our lives were turned upside down. What changes did you make to your lifestyle to help you adapt to the current situation? m9KoL
My lifestyle quite changes a lot these days after the COVID-19 pandemic, especially about hygiene. Before the pandemic, I rarely wash my hands with alcohol. I didn’t wear any surgical mask at all when I’m going outside and I didn’t have to think anything about hygiene. But, After the COVID-19 pandemic, I mostly need to stay inside my house because my health condition is not that good. So, I really need to take care of myself. So, these days my family have a big stockpile of mask and alcohol spray so I can take my alcohol spray with me all the time. Also, When I’m going outside, I need to wear a mask and I have to take some extra masks with me as well.
My lifestyle quite
changes
a lot these days after the COVID-19 pandemic,
especially
about hygiene.
Before
the pandemic, I rarely wash my hands with alcohol. I didn’t wear any surgical
mask
at all when I’m going outside and I didn’t
have to
think
anything about hygiene.
But
, After the COVID-19 pandemic, I
mostly
need to stay inside my
house
because
my health condition is not that
good
.
So
, I
really
need to take care of myself.
So
, these days my family have a
big
stockpile of
mask
and alcohol spray
so
I can take my alcohol spray with me all the time.
Also
, When I’m going outside, I need to wear a
mask
and I
have to
take
some
extra
masks
with me
as well
.
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IELTS essay Covid-19 has had a massive impact on everyone around the world. Our lives were turned upside down. What changes did you make to your lifestyle to help you adapt to the current situation?

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125 words
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