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How can you protect the environment

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Initially, using renewable energy sources is considered to be the most effective way to improve the environmental situation. Many companies are now altering fossil fuel with green energy because its usage and manufacture won't discharge emissions as fossil fuel. By reducing emissions from fossil fuels, the air quality will increase several times, creating a safer environment for both human life and production activities. As an illustration, Switzerland is one of the leading environmentalists with half of its electricity coming from alternative sources, and the country is aiming to get rid of all fossil fuels by using 100 percent of green energy in 2040.
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, using renewable energy sources
is considered
to be the most effective way to
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companies
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now
altering
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fossil
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fuel
with green energy
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because
its usage and manufacture won't discharge emissions as
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fossil
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fuel
. By reducing emissions from
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fossil
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fuels
, the air quality will increase several times, creating a safer environment for both human life and production activities. As an illustration, Switzerland is one of the leading environmentalists with half of its electricity coming from alternative sources, and the country is aiming to
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get
rid of all
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fossil
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fuels
by using 100 percent of green energy in 2040.
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IELTS essay How can you protect the environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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