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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence.

In some parts of the world cultural traditions are still highly valued. The individual has to follow certain norms according to their origin, whereas in some parts customs has nothing to do with their country of origin. This essay will emphasize the agreement and disagreement of the topic along with my point of view. Initially the culture was created so that a proper civilization can be maintained. For instance, when a person has to abide by certain habits, it brings into him certain sense of responsibility. This can be illustrated by taking Indian culture more specifically towards a married woman. It is their belief to wear certain accessories after marriage in order to prove society they are newlywed, even if they dislike. Therefore the country do creates a physiological affect on human behavior.

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 parts of the world cultural traditions are still
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 norms according to their origin, whereas in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 parts customs has nothing to do with their country of origin. This essay will emphasize the agreement and disagreement of the topic along with my point of view.

Initially
 the culture was created
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so
 that a proper civilization can be maintained
. For instance
, when a person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 abide by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpositivesureconvinced
certain
 habits, it brings into him You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpositivesureconvinced
certain
 sense of responsibility. This can be illustrated
 by taking Indian culture more specifically
 towards a married woman. It is their belief to wear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpositivesureconvinced
certain
 accessories after marriage in order to prove society they are newlywed
, even if they dislike. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 the country do creates a physiological Did you mean “effect” (consequence, outcome, result)?effect
affect
 on human behavior. 