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Some people believe online classes are more handy while others think learning in class is productive and beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Last year was not easy for all of us. It was one of the worst year of humanity. It changed a lot of things that we used to do in traditional way and education is not an exception. From last year almost every school, university lessons were in online platforms. It was the one and only way to keep the education. However, there are some people who don’t agree with this and argue that offline classes are much more comfortable and easy to study. In this essay will be shown pluses and minuses of both sides, before the reasonable conclusion is reached. As it is mentioned earlier, 2020 changed every thing about traditional way of education. Every body started to learn from home via online platforms such as Skype, Zoom and etc. There are a lot of advantages of online learning. First of all, it is safe and sound. We all stay at home in a comfortable for us condition. Secondly, it easy to manage, for instance, if somebody misses the class he can see the recoding of the lesson and catch up with the class. However, there are several minuses of online classes and the main minus is the internet connection. Most students faced problems with internet, and understanding the content, because sometimes screen freezes or connection shuts down. Such problems with online education makes people to think that offline classes are better. Somehow it is true, as it is the traditional way that millions people used to study. Every day morning students go to the class and study in face to face style. Additionally, human contact in offline classes makes easier to get the information from teacher and competitive atmosphere in class makes it more enjoyable for students. However, coin has two sides. Offline classes are vertical uncomfortable and students have to pass some amount of distance to get to the school or university. It is just a waste of students time. To put in a nutshell, after all we have undergone online classes are the best way to protect students. However, this can’t last forever so there will come a time when we all go back to the traditional way of education. Ergashev Boburbek
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some
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people
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classes
are much more comfortable and easy to study. In this essay will
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before
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changed
every thing about
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traditional
way of
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education
. Every body
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started
to learn from home via
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online
platforms such as Skype, Zoom
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. There are
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a lot of
advantages of
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online
learning.
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First of all
, it is safe and sound. We all stay at home in a comfortable for us condition.
Secondly
,
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it easy
to manage,
for instance
, if somebody misses the
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class
he can
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see
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recoding
of the lesson and catch up with the
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class
.
However
, there are several minuses of
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online
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classes
and the main minus is the internet connection. Most
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students
faced problems with internet, and understanding the content,
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because
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sometimes
screen freezes or connection shuts down.

Such problems with
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online
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education
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makes
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people
to
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think
that offline
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classes
are better. Somehow it is true, as it is the
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traditional
way that millions
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people
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used
to study. Every day morning
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students
go to the
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class
and study in face to face style.
Additionally
, human contact in offline
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classes
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makes
easier to
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get
the information from teacher and competitive atmosphere in
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class
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makes
it more enjoyable for
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students
.
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classes
are vertical uncomfortable and
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students
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have to
pass
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amount of distance to
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to the school or university. It is
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just
a waste of
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students
time.

To put in a nutshell,
after all
we have undergone
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online
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classes
are the best way to protect
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students
.
However
, this can’t last forever
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so
there will
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come
a time when we all go back to the
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traditional
way of education.

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IELTS essay Some people believe online classes are more handy while others think learning in class is productive and beneficial.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
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