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There are two kind of people in this wolrd, the one who always accept all the bad situations as their fate like the unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, the other type like to challenge the bad situations, and try to overcome it. In this eassy we going to discuss both the types, and will be sharing my view. Lets take the first category, majority of people thinks whatever the bad things happen to them is all their fate or someones mistake. Very few only realise or accept the fact that they don't have power to change it or manage the situation. Indeed, in some real situations it's beyond his/her control, like global changes, nation wide problems or even state level happenings. But they do accept all their day to day problems or those unpleasent things without even trying anyting about it, this could be mainly due to their inablity or dare not to risk anyting. These group of people will be running a vrey normal unhappy life, and will be balming someone for their bad times. Second group of people are very less when compared with the other category, who always ready to change things and have agile mindset. They always deep dive into the problem, analyse it with all the possibilities, seek advise from others, takes expert opinion, try to find the root cause, from there they will find a solution and try to resolve it permanently. They know it's not easy, creates more stress, some times it even fails as well, but they see benefits in long run. Mostly, this set of people, are risk takers and have leadership qualities. To conclude, the one who try to change and improve the situations will undergo pain during the course of time but they will have better life and acheive more over the period. On the other hand, those who accept the bad situations as it is will have either an average or poor lifestyle, and they will be usually less risk taker and like to do mundane jobs.
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always
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all the
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bad
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situations
as their fate like the unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, the
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other
type like to challenge the
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bad
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situations
, and try to overcome it. In this
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to discuss both the types, and will be sharing my view.

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majority of
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people
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whatever the
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bad
things happen to them is all their fate or
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someones
mistake.
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the fact that they don't have power to
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it or manage the
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it's beyond his/her control, like global
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problems or even state level happenings.
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. These group of
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normal unhappy life, and will be
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someone for their
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Second group of
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always ready to
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things and have agile mindset. They always deep dive into the problem,
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it with all the possibilities, seek advise from others, takes expert opinion, try to find the root cause, from there they will find a solution and try to resolve it
permanently
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benefits in long run.
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risk takers
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, the one
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they will have better life and
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the
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bad
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as it is will have either an average or poor lifestyle, and they will be
usually
less
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risk taker
and like to do mundane jobs.
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IELTS essay average percentages of three different nutrients

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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