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Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? rWgm
The answer is complex since there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them are different kinds. In some cases I would say that it is a good thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety. Take a example gastronomy. Every single person has different meals on their list of favourites. Actually if you have a bigger family it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like. Therefore I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen different food types. I can always find something that looks delicious. Naturally, there are some people who say that it is against evolution. They claim to say that back in the old days we had a perfect life when technically everybody was farming. I personally disagree with that. I am happy that I could choose a job that fits best to my abilities. I mean no one is the same, why would we want to do the same? Different kinds of universities give us the opportunity to become who we are meant to be. We have the right to choose. However there is one topic according to my opinion we have too many choices. This specific area is television. There are hundreds of channels. Therefore, you can always find something that is worth watching. Literally you could sit in your sofa the whole day and watch films. I deem that people doing less outdoor activities are results of numerous available channels. From this point of view I would agree that we have too many choices. In conclusion, I would say that we can't generally talk about choices since they could be different. In some cases it is good to have many of them. While in other areas they could have a negative effect.
The answer is complex since there are
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a lot of
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choices
in our life and all of them are
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different
kinds. In
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some
cases I would say that it is a
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good
thing to have the ability to
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choose
from a wide variety. Take
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a
example gastronomy. Every single person has
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different
meals on their list of
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favourites
. Actually if you have a bigger family it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like.
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Therefore
I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and
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choose
from a dozen
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different
food types. I can always find something that looks delicious.
Naturally
, there are
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some
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people
who say that it is against evolution. They claim to say that back in the
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old
days we had a perfect life when
technically
everybody was farming. I
personally
disagree with that. I am happy that I could
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choose
a job that fits best to my abilities.
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I
mean no one is the same, why would we want to do the same?
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Different
kinds of universities give us the opportunity to become who we
are meant
to be. We have the right to
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choose
.
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However
there is one topic according to my opinion we have too
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many
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choices
. This specific area is television. There are hundreds of channels.
Therefore
, you can always find something
that is
worth watching.
Literally
you could sit in your sofa the whole day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
films. I deem that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
doing less outdoor activities are results of numerous available channels. From this point of view I would
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agree
that we have too
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many
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choices
.
In conclusion
, I would say that we can't
generally
talk about
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choices
since they could be
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different
. In
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some
cases it is
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good
to have
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many
of them.
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While
in other areas they could have a
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negative
effect.
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IELTS essay Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
310 words
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