Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people believe companies should pay for the damage the cause to the environment, while other say that government should be responsible for such expenses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience v.2

Some people believe companies should pay for the damage the cause to the environment, while other say that government should be responsible for such expenses. 2
Damage done with the environment can be hazardous. One of the most controversial issue today leads to that, the government should pay expenses for damage done by companies or not? I completely disagree with the statement and explore some reasons for this trend, through some assertions and examples in the further piece of essay. The first step to understand that, why authority should be responsible for such expenses? The prominent reason is, government has many authorities, money collected from taxes and funds, but these facilities are for citizens living in the country. Similarly, government has many responsibilities, they have to look after for many other major issues either that is poverty or unemployment. Hence, it will become hard for government to solve those particular issues. A good illustration is; in Switzerland, citizens individually take care of the cleanness neither depending on the authorities nor on companies. The second foremost reason to understand that, why companies are not giving initiative to recover the damage they are creating? Companies can take initiative from there own and can also help government by using chimney in the factories so that it can provide ventilation for hot flue gasses from a boiler or stove to the outside atmosphere. Moreover, they can also use LED lights instead of high voltage bulbs which will save 70 to 90 percentage of energy. As we all know that LED lightbulbs are more energy efficient, so people should switch to them and give an contribution in protecting environment. In conclusion, there are number of answers to this question, but I tend to believe that, every individual should give a contribution and help in saving the environment because it is not only the responsibility of government for protecting the environment.
Damage done with the environment can be hazardous. One of the most controversial issue
today
leads to that, the
government
should pay expenses for damage done by
companies
or not? I completely disagree with the statement and explore
some
reasons for this trend, through
some
assertions and examples in the
further
piece of essay.

The
first
step to understand that, why authority should be responsible for such expenses? The prominent reason is,
government
has
many
authorities, money collected from taxes and funds,
but
these facilities are for citizens living in the country.
Similarly
,
government
has
many
responsibilities, they
have to
look after for
many
other major issues either
that is
poverty or unemployment.
Hence
, it will become
hard
for
government
to solve those particular issues. A
good
illustration is; in Switzerland, citizens
individually
take care of the cleanness neither depending on the authorities nor on
companies
.

The second foremost reason to understand that, why
companies
are not giving initiative to recover the damage they are creating?
Companies
can take initiative from there
own
and can
also
help
government
by using chimney in the factories
so
that it can provide ventilation for hot flue gasses from a boiler or stove to the outside atmosphere.
Moreover
, they can
also
use
LED lights
instead
of high voltage bulbs which will save 70 to 90 percentage of energy. As we all know that LED
lightbulbs
are more energy efficient,
so
people
should switch to them and give
an
contribution in protecting environment.

In conclusion
, there are number of answers to this question,
but
I tend to believe that, every individual should give a contribution and
help
in saving the environment
because
it is not
only
the responsibility of
government
for protecting the environment.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe companies should pay for the damage the cause to the environment, while other say that government should be responsible for such expenses. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts