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Some people argue that unemployment is due to the lack of education, while others believe that the government is the one to blame. Discuss both views and give your opnions

Some people argue that unemployment is due to the lack of education, while others believe that the government is the one to blame. Discuss both views and give your opnions 7rn8y

On the other hand, those who think unemployment is related to the government’s policies believe that many negative effects can be caused by subsidies for people who do not have a job. Although that assistant money aims to prevent the unemployed from suffering difficulties in life, they might tend to become indolent and dependent. If they think that the money given to them encourages being unoccupied, they will constantly remain in the jobless state rather than seek employment. In addition, it seems unfair for people who already have a stable career because they have to work hard to earn their living. Therefore, it can badly impact the pace of growth of the nation’s industry, especially the economy.

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think
 unemployment is related
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government
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negative
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people
 who do not have a job. Although that assistant money aims to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the unemployed from suffering difficulties in life, they might tend to become indolent and dependent.

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think
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given
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, they will constantly
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, it seems unfair for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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because
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have to
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hard
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, it can badly
 impact the pace of growth of the nation’s industry, especially
 the economy. 