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some people argue that travelling abroad is valuable for young person's education. To what extend would you agree with this opinion

some people argue that travelling abroad is valuable for young person's education. To what extend would you agree with this opinion ELVxB

The number of young people getting involved in overseas trips is increasing significantly. While some people claim that they are just wasting their time and money by visiting foreign countries, I believe that this practice is beneficial for their future development. Some people think that traveling abroad costs students a great deal of money and time. Traveling abroad is indeed quite expensive. Also overseas trips require a lot of time which could have been used for their work or study.

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 getting involved in overseas trips is increasing significantly
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 claim that they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wasting their time and money by visiting foreign countries, I believe that this practice is beneficial for their future development.

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people
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think
 that traveling abroad costs students a great deal of money and time. Traveling abroad is indeed
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 overseas trips require This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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 for their work or study. 