Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people argue that this generation have easily life compared to older generations, while other has opposite side discuss both views?

Some people argue that this generation have easily life compared to older generations, while other has opposite side 9Lym0
Some aroup of people thinks that kids growing up nowadays have a bt easier lives compare to older generation However; the other group of pepple thinks that children obviously have more pressure and problems to face than ever befoe. In my opinion, I agree with the latter view. In the following paragraph, both views will be discussed before the conchušion is reached On the one hand, in the preserit, there is more technolagy to help us make things easier such as robot. In addition, some cumpany use robots work instead of human work because they will never get tired and do just what people put informátions into them. More over, people 'can'Communicate to each other through many on line applications as face book, Line, Messages or even Instagram. Compare to the previous generotion, they talked to their friends througn Tetters. In my personal experience, I was an exchange student in America, my mohile phone actually makes me feel beter and not very foar from home because I can cotact my parents and friends easily even we are in the 'opposite side of the world. Also, English is hot My first language, I somtimes donotundenstand the words so I isé the trans lator on my pnone to help me commuunicate then I con understa nd people al around the world. On the other hand, since we have more convenient supplier, some job does not need a human work anymore, So some of people could go jobless and can cause to be a homeless. Moreover, children have higher competition to reach their dream because human Work is less needed, People nowadays have to fight for themselves even hander, For example, in hig h school, they need to stuudy very hard to get in 'thé colleğe that they want to. They hove classes to take even when school is over which is extra classes. These reasons have causea some tid to suicide themselves which shold not happen in only teenagers age. In summary, I strongly agree with the second view because in my parents age they did. not have this- much technology so they did not have to fight tao hard to get ivn their dream major, only a normal test and not in a depressed čompetition last y. I think children have harder lives compane to pre vious generation.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
Possible spelling mistake found.
aroup
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that kids growing up nowadays have a
Possible spelling mistake found.
bt
easier
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
compare to older generation
However
; the other group of
Possible spelling mistake found.
pepple
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that children
obviously
have more pressure and problems to face than ever
Possible spelling mistake found.
befoe
. In my opinion, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the latter view. In the following paragraph, both views will
be discussed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
conchušion
is reached
On the one hand, in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
preserit
, there is more
Possible spelling mistake found.
technolagy
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
things easier such as robot.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
addition,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Possible spelling mistake found.
cumpany
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
robots
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
instead
of human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they will never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
tired and do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
put
Possible spelling mistake found.
informátions
into them. More over,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
'can'Communicate to each other through
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
on line applications as face book, Line, Messages or even Instagram. Compare to the previous
Possible spelling mistake found.
generotion
, they talked to their friends
Possible spelling mistake found.
througn
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tetters
. In my personal experience, I was an exchange student in America, my
Possible spelling mistake found.
mohile
phone actually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me feel
Possible spelling mistake found.
beter
and not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
foar
from home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I can
Possible spelling mistake found.
cotact
my parents and friends
easily
even we are in the 'opposite side of the world.
Also
, English is hot My
first
language, I
Possible spelling mistake found.
somtimes
Possible spelling mistake found.
donotundenstand
the words
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I
Possible spelling mistake found.
isé
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
trans lator
on my
Possible spelling mistake found.
pnone
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me
Possible spelling mistake found.
commuunicate
then I con
Possible spelling mistake found.
understa nd
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
Possible spelling mistake found.
al
around the world.
On the other hand
, since we have more convenient supplier,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
job does not need a human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
anymore,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
could go jobless and can cause to be a homeless.
Moreover
, children have higher competition to reach their dream
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Work
is less needed,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
nowadays
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
fight for themselves even
Possible spelling mistake found.
hander
,
For example
, in
Possible spelling mistake found.
hig h
school, they need to
Possible spelling mistake found.
stuudy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in '
Possible spelling mistake found.
thé
Possible spelling mistake found.
colleğe
that they want to. They hove classes to take even when school is over which is extra classes. These reasons have
Possible spelling mistake found.
causea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Possible spelling mistake found.
tid
to suicide themselves which
Possible spelling mistake found.
shold
not happen in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
age. In summary, I
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the second view
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in my parents age they did.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
not
have this- much technology
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they did not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
fight
Possible spelling mistake found.
tao
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
Possible spelling mistake found.
ivn
their dream major,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a normal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
and not in a depressed
Possible spelling mistake found.
čompetition
last y. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
children have harder
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
Possible spelling mistake found.
compane
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
pre vious
generation.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people argue that this generation have easily life compared to older generations, while other has opposite side

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
387 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts