Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people argue that there should be a common punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out. On the other hand, others suggest that the conditions under which the criminal commits a crime should be taken into consideration before deciding the punishment. How far do you agree or disagree with the arguments presented?

Some people argue that there should be a common punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out. On the other hand, others suggest that the conditions under which the criminal commits a crime should be taken into consideration before deciding the punishment. How far with the arguments presented? 3Aa9N
Criminals ought to be misdeed in several circumstances which ending up with punishments a portion of society thinks that they must have regular punishments while others think that they may should change reckon with the decision I agree to the later statement that punishment will repeal according to the inclemency of crime To commence with, people who insists customary punishment, do not want to give a chance for offenders to escape from punishments. For instance, in the majority of cases They do not even get the punishments because of owing to lack of evidences. In fact, they are manipulating the cases into favor of them as claim to be smart criminals. Further, it will also create fear among criminals and there are some fixed punishments that impose life imprisonments as well as death penalty for the criminals who make them deter criminals from heinous offences before it happens. Alongside, the cases at the judiciary will reduce the hearing time as well as it also abates the corruption in courts. Advocates will get trigger from malpractices of cases for their clients. Eventually, fair judgments are bound to be succeeding. In contrast, punishments are opt to be different from the situation ahead of mistake happened claimed by others plus it’s impossible to differentiate between a crime and mistakes so fixed punishments are not suitable and fair. To exemplify, a murder for self-defense is different from executed murder, taking this an initiative, which allows the innocents to prove themselves from the law breakers. it will justify the punishments given to the law offenders. In conclusion, fixed punishments are a sort of cruelty. Although, it will change the mindset of the law offenders but deciding in judgments have a tendency to manifest themselves to be innocent. Law claims to be that thousands of criminals can escape except one innocent should not be guilty
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Criminals
ought to
be misdeed
in several circumstances which ending up with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
a portion of society
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have regular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
while others
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that they may
This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
reckon with the decision I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to the later statement that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
will repeal according to the inclemency of crime

To commence with,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
Did you mean "insist"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.
insists
customary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
, do not want to give a chance for offenders to escape from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
.
For instance
, in the majority of cases

They do not even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of owing to lack of evidences. In fact, they are manipulating the cases into favor of them as claim to be smart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
.
Further
, it will
also
create fear among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
and there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
that impose life imprisonments
as well
as death penalty for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them deter
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
from heinous
Possible spelling mistake. 'offences' is British English.
offences
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
it happens. Alongside, the cases at the judiciary will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the hearing time
as well
as it
also
abates the corruption in

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
courts
. Advocates will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
trigger from malpractices of cases for their clients.
Eventually
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
judgments
are bound
to be succeeding.

In contrast
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
are
Consider using a past participle here: "opted".
opt
to be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from the situation ahead of mistake happened claimed by others plus it’s impossible to differentiate between a crime and mistakes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
are not suitable and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
. To exemplify, a murder for self-defense is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from executed murder, taking this an initiative, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
the innocents to prove themselves from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
breakers.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
will justify the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
offenders.

In conclusion
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishments
are a sort of cruelty. Although, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the mindset of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
offenders
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
deciding in judgments have a tendency to manifest themselves to be innocent.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Law
claims to be that thousands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
criminals
can escape except one innocent should not be
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
guilty
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people argue that there should be a common punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out. On the other hand, others suggest that the conditions under which the criminal commits a crime should be taken into consideration before deciding the punishment. How far with the arguments presented?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    1. Describe a competition you have entered. What was your stand?
    When I was in high school, I participated in several computer competitions, but the Northern Coast competition held at Ha Long High School for the Gifted, my high school school was the most memorable one. The North Coast is a competition for excellent students in cultural subjects, usually taking pl...
  • 6band
    Some people think that the government should knock down old buildings and make way for a new building.
    Old buildings are obliged to demolish alongside government should construct new buildings I will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of it. Individuals are thinking that government must break down the medieval buildings and should establish a new one. First and foremost, while maintainin...
  • 6band
    what do you feel the ethics of Oxford University
    You and your two fellow astronauts are on your way to Mars when you uncover a stowaway in your spaceship. His mere presence means there won’t be enough oxygen for anyone to survive the journey. You toss him out the spaceship, of course. But what if that stowaway is there by accident – through absolu...
  • 6band
    How covid 19 effect your schooling and travel to canada
    No doubt, the coronavirus affect the world adversely and leads to the great recession since 2019. This deadly virus take up the life of millions of people when the outbreak of COVID-19 first has noticed in China. The major impact of this virus has observed on the educational system as well as travel...
  • 5.5band
    funding of art from government
    From prehistoric period art plays a crucial role in human society. some people believe that public art should be financed by government and this funding have to observe precisely that how it is used. I, agree with these statement and support my view with some arguments. Many arts and projects requi...
  • 6band
    The picture describes how to make olive oil
    The picture describes how to make olive oil It is clear that there are 7 steps in the olive oil process. The process starts with the picking the olives from olive trees and ends with the storage and sale At the first stage of the process, the olives are picked. After that, there are rinsed with co...