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1. Describe a competition you have entered. What was your stand?

1. Describe a competition you have entered. What was your stand? RkNmk

When I was in high school, I participated in several computer competitions, but the Northern Coast competition held at Ha Long High School for the Gifted, my high school school was the most memorable one. The North Coast is a competition for excellent students in cultural subjects, usually taking place in March every year. When I was in 11th grade, I was selected to join the computer team to participate in the competition. In the morning, we do the test on the computer. In the afternoon, we participate in the sports activities like soccer, badminton, shuttlecock. . . I participated in a football match and it was very fun. The next morning was the closing ceremony of the contest. Very lucky t got the bronze medal. Although the contest took place in a few days, I felt very happy because I not only learned more knowledge but also met new friends. If there is a chance, I will definitely attend one more time

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