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The picture describes how to make olive oil

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The picture describes how to make olive oil It is clear that there are 7 steps in the olive oil process. The process starts with the picking the olives from olive trees and ends with the storage and sale At the first stage of the process, the olives are picked. After that, there are rinsed with cold water and belted. Then, the mixture is smashed into olive paste and olive stones, but the olive stones are not used The next stage is the olive paste are put in bag with holes and pressed to liquid mixture. The sixth stage involves separating this mixture into oil and water. Finally, the end products are stored and sold

The picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 olive oil

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are 7 steps in the olive oil process. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the picking the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 from olive trees and ends with the storage and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsale.sale!sale?sale:sale,sale;
sale


At the first
 stage of the process, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are picked
. After that, there are rinsed
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water and belted. Then, the mixture is smashed
 into olive paste and olive stones, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the olive stones are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used


The next
 stage is the olive paste are put
 in bag with holes and pressed to liquid mixture. The sixth stage involves separating this mixture into oil and water. Finally
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 products are stored
 and sold