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many
group of masses assume that individuals should avoid using of
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liberary
and it is unnecessary for everyone. I
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with this notion my
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information
is justified
in ensuing paragraphs.

To comments with, there are
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couple of
define merits for using internet convincing and compelling one is, internet is a boon for human
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life
and plays a vital role. In other word, there are plethora of
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information
available on that in
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different
factors such as health, social media in along with we
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gether
a to z
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information
from search engine Google.
Moreover
, individuals can
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get
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details
about various
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countries
knowledge to
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just
tab on computer and mobile phones and from sit on their arm chair.
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Hence
if there is internet when
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it
possible.
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epitome
, one can
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get
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details
about London's popular populations
as well
as how much
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covid
cases are there
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through
the internet satellite in the television or cell phone. Owing to
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interweb
someone
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enhance
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theirindset
about technology.

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, another Prime advantage for the web, predominant is, internet
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make
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people
's
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life
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ease
. By this I mean, students can do
easily
their academic study to assist of the web, such as watching study related videos
as well
as joining online classes they solve complex problem
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through
the internet. Along with, employees and employers can run their business and discuss
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important
thing via communicate on laptop
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through
the online network.

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on
the other hand, merits of library cannot
be denied
that, a
first
and foremost is, in library we can acquire every type of
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information
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because
in library there
are upset
of books available in
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different
factors.
Therefore
, citizens can
easily
find their books for reading,
also
in library there
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where
peaceful environment, it
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aid
to
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people
do more focus on their study, scholar can
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gether
various knowledge such as about past to present
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through
reading books without any disturbance.

To conclude
, it can
be commented
that
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liberary
plays crucial role in every
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humans
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life
.
However
, benefits of internet
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make
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people
's
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life
easy and able to enhance their memory.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that thanks to the wide spread expliblity of the necessary.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
356 words
5.5
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