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Do you agree or disagree that Parents are our best teacher use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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I totally agree with this statement that parents are best teacher they teach us every thing which we need in our life to live in this world. First of all in this essay i give some reasons why parents are best teacher for us. Parents are our first teacher they pass down their essential knowledge to their children. They teach us how to eat, walk, talk, etc. They are the moral character for us. In this world child real teacher who can teach them with full attention support and care and I don't think that
I
totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement that parents
A determiner is probably missing here: "are the best".
are best
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teacher
they teach us every thing which we need in our life to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in this world.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
in this essay
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
give
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some
reasons why parents
A determiner is probably missing here: "are the best".
are best
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teacher
for us. Parents are our
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
they pass down their essential knowledge to their children. They teach us how to eat, walk, talk, etc. They are the moral character for us. In this world child real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
who can teach them with full attention support and care and I don't
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think
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that
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IELTS essay that Parents are our best teacher use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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